Reviews for What If?
PageKat chapter 1 . 7/21/2019
Bjesus. Just reading the comments is depressing! sadness.
Anonymooooose chapter 1 . 5/2/2018
Very interesting concept. Very cool.
ShadowDreamer42 chapter 4 . 12/2/2016
Wow. That was SAD!
Guest chapter 4 . 12/14/2015
I'm sobbing saddest thing ever sadder than dead cat and divorced parents how could they
Guest chapter 4 . 12/14/2015
I cry my self to sleep every night and I stop eating even if it's just a what if...I'm crying as I type this...every thinks I got dumped or something i swear I'd rather be dumped...I'm bawling my eyes out. I'm running out of tears... I almost thought of starving myself
Hdhhajsdjsjdjd chapter 4 . 9/30/2015
Ok that was sad... Now make an other end, where the Lily convinces the gryffindors to save remmy with time travel. And I mean now! Before I start crying. Oops too late
MagicWriterK chapter 4 . 8/17/2015
nOPE
THIS IS NOT FINE
SO FAR FROM FINE
ON SO MANY LEVELS
But you make many good points in your endnote. *nodding along*
MagicWriterK chapter 3 . 8/17/2015
Y'know what? Sirius and James are going to realize they were under a hate spell, or that they were completely wrong, and save Remus from his execution. And/or Lily will use her time-turner to turn back time and keep everyone from finding out. THE. FUDGING. HAPPY. END.
But why isn't Remus fighting back? He could just escape Hogwarts and run away! The ministry might not track him down! And, just a side note, Remus' self esteem is lower than how it's being portrayed.
MagicWriterK chapter 2 . 8/17/2015
I don't know how to feel about this, I don't know at alllllll help meeeeee
MagicWriterK chapter 1 . 8/17/2015
Nooooope it was all a dreammmmmm once he wakes up screaming from his nightmare they"ll ask what's wrong and find out and they'll BLOODY WELL ACCEPT HIM DANGIT
EmmyBee13 chapter 4 . 2/1/2015
I didn't cry which was weird but I definitely felt my heart breaking and I was feeling quite sick. I hope the others realise what they did but to help me deal with this I'm going to imagine it's a nightmare of Remus' before they discover the truth.
dactivated0004 chapter 4 . 6/15/2014
OMG. That was excellent! I loved the story (except the fact Remus had to die) and it really brings into perspective, no matter how horrible, without Remus being a werewolf, none of the Harry Potter stories could have happened.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/8/2014
I honestly don't think I've ever cried this much from reading a fanfic before. How could they be so mean!? Its so heartbreaking to see Remus' friends desert him. :( I'm literally sobbing right now. I have to say, of all the fics about Remus, this is one of the best. I guess that's because I can relate to it. I, like Remus, have been prejidiced against, bullied, and treated as a freak for something I can't control. Because I could relate to him so much, this story is even more powerful. Anyway, I'm not sure whether I should be thanking you for your amazing writing or plotting revenge for killing Remus. HE DIDN'T DESERVE TO DIE!
AnneCpc chapter 4 . 2/15/2014
I agree with him having a big part in HP. A lot of people have actually. But why did you have to kill him?
tratatolord chapter 4 . 1/4/2014
Nooooooooooooooooo.
Remus died TT
I love this story.
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