| Reviews for The Vampire's Alliance |
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Rita01tx chapter 42 . 5h Well, I do believe Bella's little heart-to-heart with Rosalie at least gave her pause and could well have opened the door to a better understandin'...eventually! Oh, and I hope the animals in the zoo don't freak the f*ck out at the presence of 2 vampires in their midst LOL! |
Rita01tx chapter 41 . 5h If anyone is qualified to impart some necessary "wisdom" to a newborn, it's Bella! |
Rita01tx chapter 40 . 6h Oooh, semi-trouble of the Victoria persuasion. Glad Bella was able to be on her way unhindered! |
Rita01tx chapter 39 . 7h (dang it...I was a leeetle too optimistic as well as a bit myopic LOL! It was your 1200th review but 2000 will happen!) Well, Bella didn't get into trouble but, apparently, Jenks did LOL! |
Rita01tx chapter 38 . 8h Heeey! This is your 2000th review *high five!* While I do hate to see Bella forced to leave Edward behind...and it really is necessary, I can't wait to see what kind of trouble she gets into on her own LOL! |
Rexana19 chapter 125 . 7/2 I've spent the entire day not studying but finishing this whole fic. I just couldn't put it down. This was such a lovely, extremely well written story. And you are a Terrific writer. My favourite characters in this story were Tanya and Aro. I've always disliked how most stories turn Tanya into a mate stealing jealous vampire and not her a personality of her own. Also I loved how you made Bella her own person without giving her new abilities amd making her more powerful than canon. And also given a personality of her own. Whilst teen me had absolutely adored Bella when I first read Twilight, I simply can't stand her now. And I absolutely loved the lastfew chapters. While reading I was freakin terrified for the characters. That uncertainty of not knowing what was to happen that I had to force myself to read the whole thing and not just jump to the last chapter. That being said, I was disappointed when it ended. Because there wasn't more to read and you don't have anymore fics posted(insert sad, crying emojis here) but I'm glad the ending was on her visiting London and all things coming to a full circle. And I really liked the George and Tanya angle l, that was quite unexpected but theydo have balancing personality quirks. I hope you will write more stories. Either related to this story or anything else. I think I'll read anything that you'll write. Also, I wonder if you'll write Edward's PoV on some/many of the events that occurred (the clearing/the time Bella leaves,etc) But no pressure. I understand if you would not want to. I hope you're doing well in these unprecedented times. Take care! |
Rita01tx chapter 37 . 6/28 Hell'n we could use Rosalie's screams to silence 10,000 insane protesters right about now LOL! |
Rita01tx chapter 36 . 6/25 I'm very curious how Rosalie accepts what's happened to her! |
Rita01tx chapter 35 . 6/25 Uh oh! This can't be good! |
Rita01tx chapter 34 . 6/25 Love any time Esme and Bella get to bond over something! |
Rita01tx chapter 33 . 6/25 A wise decision to keep Tanya out of the weddin' plans LOL! Although, Bella will pay for this slight for decades to come! |
Rita01tx chapter 32 . 6/25 I noticed that about Jenks an like your idea of the name (and vamp clientele) bein' handed down over the years LOL! |
Rita01tx chapter 31 . 6/25 Sometimes bein' out in the rain is fun but you really do need to keep your umbrella at hand LOL! |
Rita01tx chapter 30 . 6/25 Family visits are wonderful up until they're not LOL! It's always nice to have your time your own again! |
Rita01tx chapter 29 . 6/25 One hood rat down...two to go! |