I really liked this story, especially the end.

The 'Hinata as a gambler' made my night. Thank you. Also, really great fanfiction! The writing is nice, and the plot is interesting, which most fanfics don't have. Well done! (More like medium rare.) haha shadowhunters. thanks again, bye!

Holy crap how many people are making naruto into a bitch

Kimimaro as Naruto’s arch enemy? In a different setting I think he would be a great rival for Naruto but he is SICK and does not even have long to live (unless you cure him). In a world where Kimimaro was 100% healthy I could see him being a good rival but him being Naruto’s rival while still being sick makes Naruto seem a lot weaker than you made him seem after last chapter. Frankly I am very confused on how strong Naruto is

How are Naruto, KibaShikamaru struggling so much against Kimimaro after Naruto beat Gaara easily last chapter. I mean seriously besides Mark 2 of his curse mark Naruto should have been able to handle him by himself but instead he gets his ass kicked until ShikamaruKiba show up.

That was an enjoyable story. Good work

Naruto is rather hypocritical, first he manipulated a woman who had lost everything to Konoha into accepting a position were she will have to sacrifice her life for the village by making a big speech about how noble the others Hokage were to do just that.
But then when Kimimaro stated he is ready to die for the one he believed in then it's not right ? So it's ok to sacrifice yourself but only if it's for Konoha ? Do you want a list of the moraly ambiguous acts Konoha had done ? Because it's very easy to prove that Konoha used people for it's "own selfish goals" just like Orochimaru.

Your explanation as to why Naruto had a crush on Sakura is kinda weird. He faked interest on her because she didn't like him so he knew the villagers wouldn't try to hurt her because they would have hurt a girl who show him kindness ? Hum... Wouldn't it be easier to just not show any interest in any girl at all ? What was the point in faking a crush ? It didn't accomplish anything.

That was really good but really short.

Great story.

It was marvelous. Short but Marvelous. :3

I like stories like this because they're made by anonymous people.

Flash step analogy is dejavu on so many planes it's freaky: names, behavior, drawbacks, context, freaking relationship!

i love your work my man one of the best

that was good keep the chapters coming