I actually would be very curious to see what Francis's thoughts were throughout the entire thing. It would give more information to the story. But I have enjoyed what is here already :)

Wow, I wasn't expecting that ending at all... I guess I'm just too accustomed to happy endings. But don't take that the wrong way- this is beautiful and I love it. You're one of my favorite FrUK authors and I look forward to seeing more from you.

I would love to read a chapter with Francis's thoughts in it. I felt like reaching into the story and shaking Arthur. I wish he'd told somebody. Your style of writing in this is simple but haunting and I think it fits the story very well. Please do make this a two-shot, this is a brilliant story. :)

This was really good. You managed to create a perfectly tense, coiling sort of atmosphere and really take the reader into Arthur's mind as he worries over whether he's doing the right thing or not. Good job.

Adgjmptwjatdm ;n; Whut? This is a cliffhanger, in case you don't know! I want more!

I hate depressing stories like this, actually. That's why I want a definite ending, I can hope for a happy one. :o

The Shakespeare quote here was always one of my favourites of that play, despite its depressive-ness, and this fanfic is wonderful. A second chapter would be wonderful and give us a bit of insight on what's up with Francis.

Pleaseeeee! Make it a two-shot :((( I want to know what's wrong with Francis :(

I really liked the story, but it's very frustrating xD I wanted to know what was wrong with Francis XDD A second chapter would be great *-*

Ah ! Just a little correction In fact, "Les Ténèbres" means "darkness" and not "shadows" (Shadows "Ombres" or "Les Ombres" in French)

Sorry for the bad English, I'm French :'D

make it two shot please! .

I like the story but.. umm.. isn't it a bit too much repetitive?

anyway, I would love to see the continuation of it

good luck~ 3

Oh gosh... that... that was so sad... and beautiful at the same time... ;~; I really loved it~ it's sad to see Francis like that... he's usually so full of life... D: And fffff Arthur! You shouldn't have let him leave without helping him first... ;3; Anyways, I would be extremely happy if you made this a twoshot... please continue. ;D

What's wrong with him! Why is he broken!

Lol great story, I really liked it. Please make a second chapter.