FASCINATING

These were all really nice short stories for the Avatar universe. Thanks for writing :)

best ever zutara

good for Azula

I love all your ATLA fics! They're the best!
Keep writing please!

This was lovely, all of these were absolutely lovely. Especially the glimpses of the future.

I cried so much through all of this it could be named a new lake but I loved it!

I really like all of these. How they're such different takes on the words from take one to take two.

I love lost1. With Iroh. So very much. It's such a beautiful, sad, haunting image. One that leads to problems. But suddenly, I understand why.

And with Kyoshi discovering just what she means in this endless cycle. Part of many. All alone.

Then Zuko finishing things up with Ozai. I can see that happening. Justice and mercy and secrets and vengeance and wrapping things up and taking responsibility. You wrote that one very well.

As you also did the last one. It can put the reader at ease with a part of the story that none of us really want to think about. But you made it a thing to look forward to. :)

And suddenly, I find myself without things of yours to read! Alas. Well, I look forward to your future writings very very much. :D

I like all of the Korra moments with the next generation growing up and interacting. It was really nice how you were able to tie so many things together.

And Ursa's situation was really interesting. Wow. That would be worse than anything else. Especially coming back to Zuko's undying worry for/about her.

Zuko just has bad luck with his family members burning him, doesn't he?

I really liked the grown up Gaang all being themselves still after all those years. :)

Goodness. What are the Ember Island Players up to now?

The Korra scene was really cute.

As was the one where Aang met Ursa. :3

There are some really beautiful ones in this particular collection. I really liked the 'four sentences' one. Short drabbles are an art in and of themselves trying to tell a story in so few words. But four sentences? That's super impressive. You did it really well, though. I loved it. One for each element.

The Azula one was creepy.

And I loved Aang's. Even though it was sad. His knowing his time was coming to an end and wondering what the next Avatar will be like. Thinking things through...

So much Zuko in this chapter. I like how you brought out a different facet of his character with each scenario.

In the first, we see another look at his gaining unexpected (but not really unwelcome) family. And it's adorable, even thought the realization is awkward.

And then I love how he knows what to say to make Toph feel better, feel okay about Lin. And what to do. And that a lot of the story doesn't matter. He doesn't pry. (even though, goodness, who was it?)

The story with Sokka's daughter inheriting his artistic talents and his knowing it was so adorable and hilarious.

The last one was really harrowing. What a terrible storyline. I can't imagine what life must have been like if this had really happened. And I'm really glad it didn't. Your wording was especially haunting at the end.

Very well done. I wouldn't have thought of most of these pairings, but despite that, you write them in such a way that I can believe they would happen. Exactly as you wrote them. Very few writers can make me accepts such blatant divergences from canon. Congratulations.

I really really really liked that first one. It gave me chills. It's a terrifying story line. You described it so well... the waiting for the inevitable end and takeover of his kingdom when there's nothing more he can do about it.

And the Iroh / Ursa one was so tragic!

And the June drabble was really sweet. I liked that she found someone she could work / identify with.

I really like the things you brought out for her character here. I wanted to see your take on June. Interesting how, despite her job, she really hates war and what it does to the people around her. And she's very much like Toph, in a way, or like Toph could have gone if she hadn't joined in with the Gaang when she did. Independent.