Aw, and you write confused Fiyero so well - it almost makes me want to call him Fifi. Almost. I'd never torture him like that. I'll settle for stroking him, lol. He is so adorable when his thoughts are muddled.

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Aww..poor Yero lol..Great one-shot..so sweet!

This is great! The high-heels thing was very cute. Nice job!

You are right, Fiyero is awesome when he's confused. Gotta love his morals too, he doesn't think it's right to go after Elphaba because Galinda might kick him with her high heels :p

Oh this was unbearably sweet! Poor confused Fiyero...

I think my favorite part was when he was talking about the "stupid code" that girls have, because it's SO true! Brilliant work, you totally got into his mind.

~Mindy

Really liked this one! I especially like the first-person style, I haven't seen a lot of those around. The high heels thing was especially funny. I noticed you fixed an earlier typo, but you forgot an apostrophe in this sentence, " Not only is she the artichoke, but she's Galinda's best friend…your girlfriends best friend." Sorry to be a nitpick, but my weird little brain picks up on the most random things.

Fiyero's falling quite hard.. even better!

This was great! I needed a nice little Fiyeraba-pick-me-up today.

Good luck, Yero! (You'll need it..)

Oh yes he sure is in trouble!

A great insight into the mind of an adorable but sometimes rather confused character. I love the fact that most of the women in "Wicked" (apart from Glinda and she improves as the show goes along) is that the female characters are much smarter than the men.

Just one spelling error that I saw and I'm only mentioning it because it turns our favourite witch into a bit of a gold-digger: "The softness of her hand on your check" That did make me laugh but on the whole, this is really good.

"That's just bad. It just reminds how you might just be able to love her if you let yourself." I love that line! Very nice little ficlet. :)

I really like this, it's cute :)

Run! Fiyero's THINKING! :-) Wonderful one-shot, it really gave a humorous aspect to Fiyero's thoughts and was perfectly sprinkled with irony and little laugh moments. Excellent!