LOL LOL LOL! "To be fair, she did hit you with a bolt of super light." GENE is being the serious one for once! XD

At the beginning of the chapter, you wrote "It had been months since her change in residence. . ." A few paragraphs later, you wrote "Two months ago . . ." Which is it? The first one had made it more dramatic!

I think you have the wrong idea for what an epilogue really is.

THANK GOD, you didn't put the weird sounds in there. It would have killed the moment.

Is Naru a genius?
Of course.
Does he know anything about romantic relationships?
Er, he was thinking of balls for some weird reason . . .
So. . .
. . .so?
WHAT was that?
I believe Naru did the most sensible thing and matchmade a couple together.

ROFLMAO! XD OMG, that's just adorable! XD That ending! Naru! What's with that adorable question mark? XD 3

ROFLMAO! LOOLLLLL! That was the best! That scene with Gene and Naru watching Mai run from geese! OMG, priceless!

Very well written. Really leved it. Good job.

Heya! I started reading this story about a year and a half ago. At that time, it was still ongoing. After a while I forgot about it, even though I really loved where it was going. While I was looking for some Ghost Hunt fan fics to read recently I remembered it again so I looked it up. I was really glad to see it was completed! I started reading again from the beginning and really I loved it from beginning to end. You can write really well and I love what you did with the ending. The characters were each written down perfectly. You really did a great job on this story! Good luck with your future stories and thank you for making such a nice fan fic! :D

This was so stinking cute. It's 2 am, and I have work at 7. It was great!
What an excellent well written story.
I'm a little confused on the timeline, though I'm guessing the "old lady" witch prematurely aged due to black magic.

FINALLYYYYY! Im so lucky i decided to check up on this after like 6 months! Thank you for finally writing this up! It was a good ending, not too cheesy but maybe a bit more romance would've been better... Forget it i wont be picky. Great story!

Loving the story so far! Mai and Naru are so cute

Ooooooo she has powers in this! That's gonna be exciting!

Lol love this chapter! I love the difference between Mai and Gene and Naru. I haven't finished the anime yet so I don't know much about Eugene but it seemsike you've got their personalities down correctly!

Thank you! You were missed, and you are basically the most renowned gh writers here, other then naruisawesme, so whooo!

Aww so cute! I love how it didn't end too cliché. It ended with Naru and Mai acting like Naru and Mai. In love but still teasing each other and being themselves. So great.

I had been reading this story for a while and you would leave facts about your relationship with your mother being a bit complicated which was mortifying to know honestly and hearing you say that your getting on good terms with your mom is so much of a relief for me. I serioously cannot convey the heas of happiness weighing on my chest... Does that even make any sense? XD Anyway I am extremely happy that your life is going well. May Allah grant you happiness :)