Reviews for Sour |
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Guest 2019 chapter 51 . 9/7/2019 Very engaging. Thanks for the time travelling adventures. Loved the story. Thanks. |
Guest chapter 51 . 2/19/2019 *pops back up from the grave to suddenly grab you and shake you violently by the shoulders one last time* I LOVE THE TIME TRAVEL THING SO MUCH OKAY I'M REALLY MAD ABOUT IT I LOVE |
Guest chapter 51 . 2/19/2019 djnsjII NU JJD I JUSG I JUST BINGED THIS FOR THE PAST SEVERAL HOURS AND I AMD. SCREAMING.,internally of course bUT I AM INTERNALLY STILL SCREAMING, VERY, VERY, VERY LOUDLY HHHHOh H my fcking just fuck me up I'm so fuckign djdjfhjksswWRECKED with emotions. I cannot even begin to truly articulate properly and enough- I just, I'm just kind of speechless (but also of course I am like morally obliged to qt least leave you a bit of pure emotional word vomit) HSNHHDHS DHmkU UShdfhtH8%!kdi I'm,; I'm so this story has rlly fucked me up in the heart right now do u know what you just really had to write a fuckign timey wimey hurt/comfort angstyish emotionally-tense slow burn friends-to-lovers multichapter story that is also amazingly in-character and also amazingly heartwrenching and has actually-interesting-and-good sideplots and ddkdkfcfffFuckig Semi-Angsty Timey Wimey (TIMEY WIMEY! ! ! !) Slow Burn Friends-To-Lovers (with A Happy Ending) yOu SLAP ME IN THE FACE WITH THIS LIKE YOU JUST KNEW 90% OF MY TOP FANFIC TROPE WEAKNESSES And you just COMPILED THEM into one biG little TERRIFYINGLY BEAUTIFUL STORY (I can't believe I scrolled past this once too especially because like wtf I have always been low-key dying to see a take where Jareth and Sarah met like this (all the time travel stuff, like Jareth knowing older!Sarah before meeting younger!Sarah) so I am so glad you wrote it and that I could read this) aHHHh and the enDinGgGGGG just EverYYTHINGg h EVERYTHING this story has the power to simultaneously kill a person and bring them back to life. thank you for sharing it with the world. |
Skydriane chapter 51 . 2/13/2019 Lovely story! I've just read it in one go. I love your take on this, the random time travel and ensuing confusion, but how it allows them to get to know each other and have their relationship develop over time ;) |
Guest chapter 51 . 9/15/2018 Well written separate pieces that were definitely cohesive...I like this story to "blinks"...several "blinks" into their life...its crazy...that's how their life is complicated... lol...poor Sarah. But at least they are together...so she is no longer summoned by the king or kingdom but taken back and forth in real timeline...its crazy...hut why did it have to be done that way? |
Aurora chapter 51 . 5/23/2018 Now it’s 1am and I’ll privablg regret staying up this late tmr but your writing is beautiful |
FreakinGodzilla chapter 51 . 12/11/2017 Favorite. Such a cute and unique story. The storyline adds so much depth to the movie. It was very refreshing and enjoyable to read. Thank you! :) |
MeadowWard chapter 51 . 7/17/2016 This is still one of my favorite Labyrinth fics. I know it's older, and maybe it's because it's one of the first that I read, but it's one I find myself coming back to every few months. It's simply magical. I'm thrilled to see you're still writing as I love your style. Off to read more from you now! |
Shadow131 chapter 46 . 8/2/2014 Sarah, HE'S TALKING ABOUT YOU. Hell-ooooooo, ground control to Major Tom. |
Shadow131 chapter 43 . 8/2/2014 Sarah, haul off and kiss him, you fool. |
Shadow131 chapter 40 . 8/2/2014 SARAH, YOU MORON. Why would you say no?! You KNOW you love him, you DORK. Effing SAY YES. |
Shadow131 chapter 38 . 8/2/2014 Finally, an emotional breakthrough! I wonder if Zach is really being abused? If so, that's effing tragic. |
Shadow131 chapter 33 . 8/2/2014 OH DEAR, I smell wishing-away-baby-sisters... |
Shadow131 chapter 28 . 8/2/2014 Oh man...All I can hope is that he's married to Sarah in a screwy timeline. |
Shadow131 chapter 23 . 8/2/2014 Oh man, Linda reminiscing on Sarah's childhood obsession with the Labyrinth is AWESOME. |