Good story. But why'd minato have to die man

I like this story thank you for writing this
This story will remain in my favorite list till i die

This story should have never been written if you never intended to have passion for it in the first place. Why bother writing something if you didn't want to write it to begin with.

The story is mediocre and leans on kinda bad. You zip through the story and just skim events the entire time. Characters barely have any interactions. Naruto wasn't Naruto anymore. He turned into someone else. He's not articulate. Naruto also doesn't read. He also doesn't say dumb stuff like he said to Mikoto just because she apologized. Narutos character and the ridiculously fast pace is what made this unreadable. Grammar is okay, but everything else is not great.

Seeing Narutos character in the story and seeing how you write Authors Notes, makes me believe you just projected yourself as Naruto. Then, you come to say that you leave the Fandom because you want to write regular fiction. Lol. If this is how you write stories, I don't see it working.

Show some actual effort, otherwise, no one will bother.

Naruto has another use: He is a certified naruto-standard-chakra-meter: “take that, it cost only 5% of my chakra pool...”

This was good. I don’t see Naruto fics that deal with time travel often. Even less when dealing with prebirth times and almost never complete. I do think it was a little short but when dealing with fics where the protagonist gets OP fast that’s to be expected lol

This is getting hard to read. Holy shit is this an edge lord, pre-teen, shit. Naruto doesn't come across as cool, he comes across as cringeworthy. And fuck me sideways, how do you constantly seem to misspell so many words?

Best I have read till now in fast paced stories. Thx btw

fourth kazekage is named rasa.

999 reviews...I couldn't resist. Lol
This was a fun quick read. Fast pace.
Sometimes you are just looking for that one quick story.

Minato'a death was unnecessary. The Sword of Totsuka could have sealed both halves. I'm assuming you did this so Naruto could be named Hokage without taking Minato's spot?

Damn, that's an amazing thought. I like that thought, that if Naruto unlocked Itachi's sharingan naturally he would've had it as a kekkei genkai. Maybe it only unlocked because of Madara though, which would kind of be a shame.

This was nice, kinda wish there was a bit more character development than just "Naruto's been dating Mikoto for a while" but still nice.

Bro hands down this story was amazing

Hands down the best time travel naruto fanfic with greatest ending

This chapter felt like a big "Fcuk You" from the author. Well fcuk you too.