I can't believe I didn't have this fav'd. It's better every time I read it. Love sexy, teasing Gokudera. c:

Have I reviewed this before? I should have. This is one of the best 8059 oneshots I've ever read, and I always come back to read it. Whenever I see people smoking, I always recall this story xD Loved, loved, LOVED IT!

Wao that was... O,O complete amazement. That was perfect...WAOOO

Woah nice story there! XD you got their personalities brilliantly even if you might not be a 8059 fan, good job! ;)
Haha lolz I don't really like smoking or ppl who do but damn every time I read/watch Gokudera smoke it's always pretty smexy xD and reading this fic just make it seem all the more cooler too x]

Woow really liked this one, le french inhale...hmmm I wonder if it's hard to do? o I don't really smoke though but it sounds kinda hard.. haha poor Yamamato-kun w

My third time re-reading this story and...I. LOVE THIS.

So sosososososoososo much.

It's so enjoyable to watch Yamamoto get all flustered like that.

His reaction to Gokudera it's just...d'aww and I liked how even while Gokudera's in the midst of being unbelievably hot, Yamamoto still can see through that and comfort him and whatever.

*squee*

I loved it :)

Woah, this was awesome. XD And Goku can be seducing, even if unconciously doing it. :P

I loved this XDDDDD~

Although I didn't understand quite well what Gokudera does O.o'(probably because English is not my native language) but I will read it again, until I can understand it XDDD

GIRL, YOU GAVE ME A WOMAN-BONER. TROLOL, just kiddin', but you made Gokudera SO DAMN HOT.

Great story! I liked that you delved into their relationship without making generalizations or being cheesy. The fact that the story fits into the KHR plot and reveals very plausible thought processes of the characters after the Vongola ring battles was a good idea. It's funny, because I am a fan of Gokudera, and smoking is a huge turn-off for me, but if anyone could make it look sexy it'd be Gokudera. I kinda wish there was a little more to the end of the story though; I felt like I was being teased with the possibility of a little smut (I was hoping for at least a kiss) but then it was over. :(

Damn, Gokudera. Why such a tease? :D

Delicious, just delicious! I quite agree with Yamamoto there. I don't like smoking either, but it's alright so long as it's Gokudera. Or someone closely resembling him, in any case.

LOVE this! :D

..uhm hi, i hope you're not bothered by the fact that i didn't not put my name, and if you are then I’m really sorry *bows head and repeatedly says sorry over and over again until it gets annoying* well I don’t really mean that it’s just that I’m not that comfortable in giving my name, so yeah so sorry, but your name sushi bomb was cute it gave me the idea that the sushi was yama then the bomb was goku well anyway sorry for that, I’ll start my comment or review

I really like your story from the title to the last word. Well the title was really catchy, the thing is when I was looking for a yamagoku story and spotted the title, I was like “French inhale? What’s that” and without even bothering to read the summary I opened it in a new tab, but I still did read the summary, then once I’ve read the summary I was like “this was going to be good” I’m not in to smoking (no offense to those who smoke, I have friends who smoke but I still love them ) but I was still drawn to it. And as I was reading your story I kept on wondering what makes hayato hot and sexy, and yama’s thoughts was not helping, but I the way you write his thoughts it feels like it’s real what I mean is that I can really relate to him since I do observe people around me specially those who caught my attention and since I can really relate to him makes me think that yama’s thoughts are close to real.. And what I really like about your story is your plot and how the story flows from yama’s thoughts to goku’s problem or frustrations, and how yama’s confession ended up comforting goku without getting mushy or cheesy and still manages to make the characters cool (I’m sorry if that was not clear it’s just that I’m not good at explaining specially in English but I still, l want to let you know what I think of it). I also like your characterization of them, because I can really imagine them behaving that way and them saying those lines. I think I should end it here, I’m really sorry that it end up this long, and I bit of crap-is and maybe some wrong grammar, really sorry I tried not to do this but sometimes I can’t help it, It’s like when I started typing I just type and type without realizing that its already long so yeah sorry again..

If you feel that it’s too long then I’ll put a short comment or review. “YOUR STORY WAS REALLY REALY GREAT I REALLY ENJOYED IT” so yeah bye then and keep writing great stories…

.take care.

~akap akap~ (hug hug)

*peace out*

HAHAHA. Nice one! Nice plot, well written too! Hurray for Goku seducing Yama :))

Ooooh, this was hot, had character analysis and even a plot! Perfect! I loved it!