With respect you need a beta that understands English. I've noticed a lot of mistakes throughout your story concerning when using off and of. For example in this chapter Angela says to Jane 'Did Maura get of ok' when it should have been off and later on there's a line saying 'She heard Jane's sharp intake off breath' but this should be of.

Maura is the Chief medical examiner so she doesnt have to do an autopsy and can call in Pike, Popov or any other medical examiner in the commonwealth to do it. Also Korsak or anyone else in Boston Police Department doesnt have the authority to call her in to do one eiher because she doesnt work for Boston Police department as you seem to be suggesting.

Really nice story. I wish you would come back.

Right this chapter doesnt make any sense to me. I think you've missed something out. Jane has recovered far too quickly. Its not that long ago that she was in agony and only just managing to go to the loo on her own but now she's jumping in & out of taxis running away from Maura.

So I have spent 2 days reading this story, which I love by the way, only to have it incomplete. It has been over 2 years since you have written anything on it. It is really frustrating to me to invest so much time in reading a story and not have an ending. Please change this. I understand if you have lost your muse, I really do. All that I ask is that either you take the story down or find an ending.

I have to say, I have never fallen in love with an authors writing before... But the way you wrote these two stories... just WOW. I love it. I know it's almost 4 years later... But is there any chance of you continuing these two fics? I'm dying to see Angela and Maura's conversation, and if Jane will ever be alright again. She has already let love in, but will she ever get over losing her baby boy, and what that awful man did to her? I refuse to even call him her husband, because no man should ever treat his wife like that, or his child. I wouldn't even call him a father... he is a sperm downer, that had psychopathic control issues.
I would have loved to see if Jane and Maura would ever get married and have more children. I say more children, because Jason was their child. I'm sure he loved Maura, and would have been so happy that his mom's were finally happy together.
I do hope you will one day return, to Grace us with your marvellous story lines, and heartfelt writing. I don't even care if these were , you're human and we all make them, but they were so far and few between that they're hardly even noticeable. Your writing just captured me... your ability to tell a story that is gripping and intense, but also heartfelt. I just love it.

WOW. What an awesome story. I just found this, I hope that you will continue with it. I would love to see what Angela's problem with Maura is.

too bad u never finishes thia story. it was just amazing

Can't wait to read more. I don't like the way Angela has been treating Maura and really want to know why :(. Can't wait for the next update.

-chapter. 02.
como assim, o filho de Jane morreu? eu já sabia que ele ia morrer, mas mesmo assim! queria tanto que o filho de jane vivesse, eu sei que é stepson mas na historia jane via ele como um filho de verdade.

p.s. im sorry, i just in that period of the month so im just too whathever (all wrong i know) to think of write in english, sorry again. uhmm... how many chapters have in here ... 26 awesome! i will read all by tomorow if i will still be in the high that im now, but dont think its from drugs or alcohol, not at all, i just drink coffe, and i can't, but its so delicious (look i just write everything in english again, all wrong i think, dont worry i ll be in my class of english saturday ) bye ;)

i started reading your story today and i am up to chapter 19 and i am hooked but have to go to sleep, I am so totally hooked. Can't wait to read more!

IM READING FROM THE FIRST CHAPTER and was so awesome, i mean i felt, really really sad. so is your falt that on the international day of happiness i got sad! was like so wow :) i ll read the chapter 2 now and leave you alone, sorry.

p.s and sorry for all my mistakes english its not my native language. ;)

I love this story so much. So glad you updated and I hope you continue.

I've read this and your other story. Thank you for sharing them both, but it seems to me like you did not finish this one. I hope you come back to it one day. My favorite part was when Sarah came to visit Jane and told her she didn't blame her for Jason's death. That almost brought tears to my eyes.

Nvr finished the story