Oof my ovaries...this is literally the only toxic relationship I'll support. Good luck on writing the next chapters :)

Yes please fall.. Is what I thought. I love your story, it is my favorite, I can't wait to read more chapters.

Yup he is soooo gonna fall

I really enjoy reading your story. Can't wait for more chapters

I kind of want to fight the both of them. Fucking both of you are idiots! Fight me you walking disasters (ಠ益ಠ)

I really enjoyed reading this chapter and I think I might know who the mysterious might be. ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)

Is it bad that I really don't want them to get together? I dunno there's something toxic about both of their attitudes towards others and it feels like they're only going to get hurt over and over with all the manipulations, assault and rape. Even in the christmas special it felt the same like they're not in love it's all obsession and lust. I don't see how either side could love the other when one is a rape victim and the other is a rapist.
I hope this doesn't come across flamey, I feel like something must bring them together at some point and kick start them caring about each other a bit and actually date or maybe they'll just end up hating and raping eachother idk it's a weird dynamic you've got going on so who knows they could get bored

Like like really like. Can't wait to see more!

Poor Seph! I can't wait to see what else you have in store. Maybe Seph can put Cloud into his place for once ;)

You can't just leave it there! Please more? Please?

Oh my gosh. I read this out loud with ma friends over here. One has a boner and the other can't stop whimpering in embarrassmen

I was very happy to read a new chapter, thank you so much! Your writing style is still very good, and doesn't clash with your previous chapters! Sephiroth cracks me up with his determination to get away from Cloud and find some pretty ukes to fuck, but never does lol :)

Oh wow. It's scary when Sephiroth's pissed.

Wow its everything I've been waiting for. Sephiroth got really angry ( I was waiting for the moment he would snap) and now poor Cloud is sitting back there thinking about what just happened. And I've got a feeling Sephiroth might have a plan or is coming up with one. Overall great way to show your getting back into it, and nice use of massamunae in this chapter.

I seriously love the way you write the smut - I mean, that was so hot! XD And, beside that, I feel that the tension between Cloud and Sephiroth is definitely on theverge of something important for the developement of the plot... especially now that Sephiroth seems to have realised how things should be dealt with, once and for all. I wonder what Cloud is going to do about this all anyway. Shall we expect an essential turning point soon? :) I'm waiting patiently for the next chapter.

That is the hottest chapter I ever read.