how can it be forbidden its step sister and brother it would be different in jahovas eyes if they were blood releated then thats a sin incest

if she talked my mother like that i would kill stone dead without morse

im not a fans of incest, but i will make this an exception

I expected the gift to be Kon
Makes no sense but when do either of them make sense

It just keeps getting worse, I tried I really did, but it's terrible I'm sorry

I can't bear it. The grammar hurts. Microsoft world helps. Bye.

Grammar. Please. Tenses. Hurts to read. Good story.

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Aww! I love it! :)

Ok... When I saw "First Kiss?" at the top... This was NOT what I was expecting... Nice job on that curve-ball... Loving the story so far...

How...does that even make sense? Rukia said that she "Hai, but not for the reason you know". It's just not plausible for a knife wound not to lead to a murder investigation and thus eventually leading to the unveiling of the fact that Rukia murdered her mother. Maybe I'm being nitpicky but just how did Isshin think Rukia's mother died? That the mother fell on the knife accidentally and somehow Rukia got covered in blood? My issues with this aside, I've enjoyed the story thusfar except for the word tenses being incorrect in numerous places in the story. Please keep writing and keep up the good work.

Eventhough inoue is a boyfriend snatcher and like to hang out with unknown guys, but she still scored in top 10 student list, haha.

Luv it.!
I'll be going to 'You are my love' now.. :)

This is it.! This is really is it.! The final chap.. Ooh im sooo xcited.!

Awww.!
*sniffles* ;')