| Reviews for The Destined Tale |
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corjca1 chapter 13 . 1/19 how can it be forbidden its step sister and brother it would be different in jahovas eyes if they were blood releated then thats a sin incest |
corjca1 chapter 1 . 9/27/2019 if she talked my mother like that i would kill stone dead without morse |
Crimsomgear chapter 13 . 6/4/2019 im not a fans of incest, but i will make this an exception |
Guest chapter 13 . 1/29/2018 I expected the gift to be Kon Makes no sense but when do either of them make sense |
Amon Kashino chapter 11 . 12/10/2016 It just keeps getting worse, I tried I really did, but it's terrible I'm sorry |
Deleted6743 chapter 8 . 2/15/2016 I can't bear it. The grammar hurts. Microsoft world helps. Bye. |
Deleted6743 chapter 7 . 2/15/2016 Grammar. Please. Tenses. Hurts to read. Good story. |
Lucciana-chan chapter 12 . 1/27/2016 i |
wolfgang04 chapter 23 . 8/10/2015 Aww! I love it! :) |
bjorn aleswiller chapter 10 . 2/5/2015 Ok... When I saw "First Kiss?" at the top... This was NOT what I was expecting... Nice job on that curve-ball... Loving the story so far... |
Kobic chapter 8 . 1/7/2015 How...does that even make sense? Rukia said that she "Hai, but not for the reason you know". It's just not plausible for a knife wound not to lead to a murder investigation and thus eventually leading to the unveiling of the fact that Rukia murdered her mother. Maybe I'm being nitpicky but just how did Isshin think Rukia's mother died? That the mother fell on the knife accidentally and somehow Rukia got covered in blood? My issues with this aside, I've enjoyed the story thusfar except for the word tenses being incorrect in numerous places in the story. Please keep writing and keep up the good work. |
guest chapter 10 . 6/7/2014 Eventhough inoue is a boyfriend snatcher and like to hang out with unknown guys, but she still scored in top 10 student list, haha. |
kNOTdahkawaiiDINOsaur chapter 23 . 5/5/2014 Luv it.! I'll be going to 'You are my love' now.. :) |
kNOTdahkawaiiDINOsaur chapter 22 . 5/5/2014 This is it.! This is really is it.! The final chap.. Ooh im sooo xcited.! |
kNOTdahkawaiiDINOsaur chapter 21 . 5/5/2014 Awww.! *sniffles* ;') |