| Reviews for Cherry Lips |
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Animelvr975 chapter 1 . 7/17/2014 This was really good! I hope you make more since you are a really talented writer. And if you can make a multi-chapter story with this pairing since there aren't many if any at all. It deosen't have all smut it can have fluff and whatever you want. Loved the part with Lambo and I-pin XD. But anyway loved it 10/10 :D. |
Lance Siegfried chapter 1 . 7/12/2014 Would you please write another Haru x Kyoko M-rated Fic? The two of them having Sex with each other's hot. |
MangoPeanutSituation chapter 1 . 3/2/2014 Lol |
PoppedOutKirika chapter 1 . 8/2/2013 i was just wandering, Lambo n I-Pin, how old they were? :/ I prefer KyokoHaru in TYL, but I want Lambo n I-Pin to stay little in this fic x'D btw, gj make one more of KyokoHaru pwease? :3 n rate M too xD |
Anonymus chapter 1 . 7/28/2013 errrrrr... um... i know you wrote this a long time ago... but i came across some wrong facts... women dont... have "juices" when they orgasm... this is awkward... well ciao |
naruhime87 chapter 1 . 12/22/2011 it's not suprise to find a m-rated fic KyokoHaru since they always stick together in manga.(that's what always happen to close friend/rival characters,i can see that) one thing,i wonder what would be happen if Tsuna and Gokudera is the one who barge into the room XD but i doubt that would ever . Nice story,though. |
by.the.candlelight chapter 1 . 6/29/2011 I really need to check my email more. That way I don't flip my shit when I not only find a light-hearted M-rated Kyoko/Haru, I find a light-hearted M-rated Kyoko/Haru, written by the goddess of KHR fanfic. I love this! It was filled with sweet lemony goodness and a touch of humor. I nearly died when Lambo and I-pin burst in, and when Kyoko and Haru are left staring at the doorknob. A very enjoyable read, your stories always manage to make my day. |
Goldenbutterfly chapter 1 . 4/17/2011 O/O uh...pretty OOC but um they had to b I guess since its yuri. btw, how old are I-pin & Lambo in this oneshot? |
Imitation Angel chapter 1 . 4/14/2011 Voyeurs. LOL. It wasn't bad. I've always felt bad for never pairing Kyoko/Haru up with someone; so I like this fic :3 |
ComplexImage chapter 1 . 4/13/2011 Alright... Haven't been to much and the first thing I saw in the M section is a yuri pairing with one of my favorite yuri pairs, and with the author by the name of sweet-and-simple... I love you now, please marry me. Lol, that aside, I like how you do the smut going. Although when I read that I was still confused what position they're in. Other than that, it's nice :D |
Coke-A-Cola chapter 1 . 4/13/2011 Lmbo! I love that Lambo and I-pin barged in. I couldn't stop laughing the entire time Lambo was trying to locate the doorknob. Ah... my tummy hurts. -wipes tear- This was strangely hawt! And the 'gotta be calm' was priceless. I can totally see that happening! I just love how you write Lambo! It's always so cute and adorable. Just wanna take him hoooooome. But Reborn might shoot me dead if I even dare get too close to his ahoshi. oAo You're also the reason I got into 1827! I never thought about that couple until I started reading your stories. I must say, I do enjoy me some Hibari and Tsuna lovin'. Love your work! Shall review more often! Can't wait to read more from you! |
Lady Natsuka chapter 1 . 4/13/2011 ... ./. I'd never thought the day would come that I'd ever bother to read a yuri fanfic, a M-rated one too. xD Funny enough, it doesn't really bother me. (Considering the fact that I read yaoi fanfics all the time) Anyways I think it was great! It sounded just as awesome as your other fanfics. :D I can't wait to read more~ :] Natsu Wan |