That was so sad. I loved the lemon. I loved this story so much!

The end made my heart ache

This is so sad, you should make a reunion chapter maybe if Madara died or Pein got resurrected by Edo Tensei! The first part, I was a little scared of what would happen and then the middle part totally made me want to say Awwww and then the last bit makes me want to cry! I got to say it is well written to make me feel all these emotions in one and a half thousand words! Ja Ne!

Nice, pourquoi il est mort ? bouhh pein BEAU LEMON

AHAH! I hope u aren't dead...
Greatness! I've always loved this pairing ;D

hoooooooottt!

Awwww that was cute. Please continue :)

Lols XD You're author notes are alway so funny - Anyway, awesome job, and - although I didn't think I'd like the story - I loved it. Also...(wait for it)...NO GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES! *fireworks go off* BANZAI! Lols XD But seriously, good job on this, Kitsune-san -

nice little conversation at the end with the characters. Makes a good comic relief after the sad ending.