| Reviews for Ryoga's Girlfriend |
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kuro02 chapter 14 . 10/27/2019 Not even a yaoi fan and I still loved the mranma and hibiki kiss But as I said akame is just a third-party |
kuro02 chapter 13 . 10/27/2019 I don't know what to feel about the love triangle...akame look like a third wheel |
kuro02 chapter 8 . 10/26/2019 The son of a bitch said it |
Raeanne Bedard chapter 1 . 8/26/2019 this story just brought up the feels for me |
Guest chapter 14 . 8/10/2019 Hope you can release the last chapter soon. |
FanaticOP chapter 14 . 8/7/2019 You should have give a warning on the first chapter that the pairing will be akane/ranma/ryoga. Forgive me for saying im quite shocked with the ending. The threesome pairing felt forced. ps : you are one of my favourite author. I love most of you story. Keep on rereading them. Maybe not this one or nodoka's son. Sorry threesome really are not my cup of tea. |
ringo1joy chapter 14 . 7/13/2019 I can’t find the video maybe say the make of the video |
ringo1joy chapter 14 . 10/10/2018 The ending was just lazy |
Thean Bitter Crowe chapter 1 . 2/25/2018 Ok, I really enjoyed the story... but not the end, at all. It felt lazy, the whole three pair thing. I being less harsh right now because I really did enjoy the story, but I will as far to say I hated the ending, the romance between Ranma and Akane in this story was non existent, all ya did was keep telling us that Ranma love her, but not express it, in this fanfic he does not have a romantic scene with her, most of the time it is awkward and frustrating, and honestly... feels like a cop out. I know it is just fanfiction, but if that is your reasoning why bring up cannon? I still enjoyed the story, just not the end. |
LuckySeven-Chomei chapter 13 . 4/30/2017 Love this story and it's predecessor. The development of Ranma's and Ryoga's relationship is awesome; not to fast and not to slow. I think you read the following already a few times but I don't really like how it ended. To be honest I don't like harem endings with multiple characters in a relationship. But your also right that the relationship between Ranma and Akane is too strong to be just ignored. Though if this ending was the one you intended from the start you should have given Akane more time with Ranma. For me at least, it felt kinda forced how she got included in the end. |
Green Sprout chapter 2 . 1/2/2017 This is pretty entertaining. Good plot and no major character bashing. |
RooBazooka chapter 14 . 12/28/2016 O.O I approve of the ending. Nice work, Senapi |
Azaira chapter 2 . 10/20/2016 Loved the first story. This is is good too, but I feel like there's way too many point of view changes. Some can be crammed together or mixed, while one or two don't even need to be there. I probably wouldn't mind it so much if each was more than a few paragraphs. It's like being in the middle of a room with various conversations all around you, although in a specific order. It's not hard to follow, but looking between various groups and going back and forth between them is just a bit... yea. |
gump1098 chapter 14 . 9/9/2016 This was really like a box of chocolates. You never knew what you were gonna get. |
luger 7 chapter 14 . 7/29/2016 I knnow we've had some problems in the past, dude. But youre writing's alright. |