| Reviews for Oblivious |
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Guest chapter 13 . 5/12 Oh, how wish you had finished this. |
rswknight chapter 13 . 4/12 Love this idea. Wish there were more. Nice work |
Vanadir chapter 13 . 7/16/2019 Thank you for a great story |
VioletBuckbeak chapter 13 . 7/7/2019 good story! hope you continue it one day. |
Jessi Granger chapter 13 . 7/7/2019 This is really amazing! The relationship between Harry and Hermione is absolutely adorable. I love Harmony! Thank you for sharing your writing. Please continue |
tyrannicpuppy chapter 13 . 7/5/2019 As far as points for an abandoned fic to end this is pretty good. You could picture this as a season finale where they've beaten this season's enemy but the war still rages on. I love the Harmony relationship in this one. As Hermione said at the, after everything they've overcome, they know what they feel is real. I doubt anyone could convince them otherwise anymore, obliviations or not. A very nice story that I would love to see concluded some day. |
tyrannicpuppy chapter 11 . 7/5/2019 What a great chapter. I was so suspicious when she answered the door, but she turned out to be so much fun. I hope they get to have that second chat some day. |
tyrannicpuppy chapter 5 . 7/5/2019 This highlights one of the dumbest decisions they made. Who returns directly to their safehouse from the scene of a crime with the cops on their tail. They should have apparated somewhere open and unimportant then headed back to Grimmauld when they were sure they were safe. Great fic so far. |
tyrannicpuppy chapter 1 . 7/5/2019 Oh yes. Such promise, I think I'm going to enjoy this. |
pianomouse chapter 13 . 7/5/2019 Just rereading this story gives me a smile. I really enjoy your premise for this and the way you have them caring for each other. Thank you for sharing this with us, I hope you come back to this one day. |
Sorceress of Magic chapter 13 . 7/5/2019 Aw I loved this! |
Bronze chapter 6 . 3/1/2018 You're really screwing with the canon timeline here. Riddle COULD NOT have attended Hogshits in 1930 and still been given an award in the 1940's. It was in the early '40s that he's supposed to've made the diary Horcrux and framed Hagrid. So if you were following canon you're 10 yrs early on Riddle's attendance. Not that I really give a damn. It's your story. Write it as it pleases you. |
Bronze chapter 4 . 3/1/2018 Knew it would all come down to " It was for the greater good. " bullshit! The ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder would never explain exactly what the " Greater Good " was to anybody. My personal opinion is it was always the personal greater good of the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder. I call him that as he never could think of anybody but himself. He was an information black hole. Everything went in and shit came out. And he spread that shit on everybody thickly. |
Bronze chapter 3 . 3/1/2018 I've pointed this out many times before and I doubt I'm the only one to notice it. The ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder never consulted ANY other intelligent being concerning Harry's wound when he was a baby. He easily could've talked to one of Gringott's Curse Breakers about checking it out and removing the soul piece. Yet never has he even suggested it to Bill Weaseley. |
Bronze chapter 2 . 3/1/2018 I can believe all the teachers at Hogshits and every member of the Order was in on it too. After all, he was the greatest living wizard since Merlin don't ya know? How could he possibly be wrong?! I really think they need to change the name of their group. The Phoenix is a noble bird and very likely highly intelligent. So to name a group of followers who do whatever they're told without thinking for themselves after such is a crime. They should call themselves The Order of the Sheep. |