cute ending but sortof sad. I guess the sad part was intentional though. Good job.

I can haz mawshmewos too?

Interesting twist of faith, mate.

X3

"Danny saw realization dawning in Dashes eyes... "

Tell me what is wrong in this line that is lifted from your story...

Do you know that the possessive tense is notated by apostrophe "S" as in "Danny saw realization dawning in Dash's eyes...", which even still doesn't make this sentence or this story for that matter that much better. I'm sorry, but this story isn't written well at all. I'm assume just by the bevy of errors, including the one listed above that you are not familiar with English as a language. If you are, you would be able to comprehend why and what is wrong here. The reviews below that advise you that this story is good, great even, are wrong. I will say that I love the idea, You certainly have a good idea going here and you've chosen an interesting setting, which could have made for an interesting and well done story.

This is so cute! We love it! Hopefully, you write more...? ;D

So Danny's ghost half... died? And people who loved/supported Phantom before hated him now? *sniff* Sad. Makes me wonder what exactly happened.

Still, I liked the character interaction between Dash and Danny. Beautiful story.

~Kigy

Aww it's cute!

It's... a bit confusing, and I can't exactly say that I'm a shipper for this pairing, but it was really sweet and well written.

I wish there had been a bit more of confrontation between Fenton and Dash, though. :(

The dialogue was very in-character. I really like that.

You did a great job.