Like any story stupid enough to kill of a sex god you've led me to tears.

God, I couldn't cry when I sacrificed my friendship with my best friend, but I cried when watching reading Auron be sent. Bah, my face feel gross from tears now '[ I loved it.

Love the story. Sniffle sniffle so sad. Please do a sequel.

Aww, I liked this story a lot. :D Great closure. Yay!

Ok, just die. Not you... me. I don't like Lulu and Auron like that in ch. 9. Eww. Well, the story is good none the less. Keep going

Oh please have a sequel where Auron comes back! Oh Please oh Please!

I like this fic _ very well done though I though Lulu was a bit too evil without enough redemption.

wow..look...real real tears..sad beautiful ending

plz wrtite a sequel! its a really good idea if u do

The plot is wonderful, the interactions are fabulous and VERY original, and the characterization stays in tone all the way through. Fantastic. My only complaint is the... well. Let's say that my vocabulary is rather extensive - I can expound in supercilious verbiage as well as the next pompous college girl. But there's also a great need for simplicity in writing like yours. Don't be a thesaurus-dependant lamer. Your writing is *good.* You don't need to use words like "oculars" when "eyes" do fine and take up less space. If you're having trouble finding different words, write it in a different way. Talk about the gaze, not the eyes, or a phsical, palpable reaction rather than an abstract emotion that may or may not be readable.

The rest of the story has been fantastic so far, and your kind of writing is why I look through this site at all. I only bring this up because it was particularly prominent in this chapter.

So far, this has been excellently in character. I love! So rare! A well-written slashfic that stays true to the original. I'm going to keep reading, but I had to say something about it.

Wow...*sniff*...that was unbalievabley beautiful. I've never read anything like it before- so powerful. I would dearly love to see a seaqual, but , on the other hand, I think that it would be better to leave what is complete. (For all I know you may have already but-)
Thanks for giving me the best read of my life.
~Authriel

A really beautiful story and I hope you can write the sequel too. Good work~!
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o, great story! You really, really really, should continue with a sequel. Mhm, cuz I say so! .

Heh heh heh...looks like Lulu's a little jealous of Rikku, eh?

Wow, this is really good, i was crying by the end of it. you have a lot of talent. hope to read more of your stuff. all the best
Imperial Saturn

ERROR:
Aurons best sword is not called masamune, it's called "MURASAME".