OMG I really love this story. I was reading this fic for about two weeks and I read it while going to school, in classes, before I went to bed. I really love how the story was jam packed with much vivid details. I also, Love this pairing, the sense of humour and, most of all, the suspense. I', now going to read the continuation of this fic Act V. Keep writing~

Thank you for writing the ending I always wanted- i.e. get out of Kirkwall and fix Anders, the whole Justice being free is nice too; I'd always worried that he was permenently on the slope to being the demon vengence and I'd always liked him in Awakening (more so than Anders I think).

And a Fenris/Anders semi understanding/ mature conversation love :D

"Bad Feathers," Merrill chided as she ran over there, trying to untangled the frightened puppy. "We do not eat bunnies, they are cute and have floppy ears and most important of all, they run really, really fast."- Oh dear, I think I might actaully be Merrill (at least when it comes down to bunnies)!

I thought at first Hawke was going to keep the Qunari wand- in the whole 'DA has a DARK side' style but your ending was infinately better.

Random fact: Listening to the battle music from Narnia goes really well with this final chapter!

Now... I'm curious to see where you're going to take Act V - it's interesting to see another person's POV on something that hasn't even been released yet (personally, I have an odd obsession with seeing either gender hawke and Anders dying as martyrs in each others arms, but then again I have a strange desire for such bittersweet romantic endings!)

Anyway! What did I like most about this story? Probably the fact that you had Fenris and Anders reconcile just a little bit - Fenris can be such a stuck up pain in the ass sometimes, and it was refreshing to see him finally listen to what Anders had been trying to drill into his thick head for majority of DA2's storyline. Oh and the new coupling introduced (won't mentioned it in case it spoils it for other people) had me giggly and happy!

Complaints? Hum... can Anders get a new cat in Act V? Haha!

I was going to wait another couple of chapters before posting a review... but! I needed to mention this:

That comment from Hawke about Anders and Fenris going at it totally went somewhere far dirtier in my mind than it was meant to go. XD

Your Hawke is very... resourceful, to say the least ;) It made me all giggly happy to see a certain elf back in this story! However, I did notice you mentioned house Denarius - did you actually mean that or did you mean Danarius?

So Anders got the recipe... either that or he actually paid attention in chemistry class back at the Circle, which is unlikely (he was probably spending most of his time either a. trying to bed every humanoid thing that moved, b. cooing over a cat, or c. trying to escape)

Anyway! I agree, trying to figure out half the events of DA2 is one of the reasons I myself write as well... but enough of this ranting :) Great work, as I have said before! Still looking forward to reading more!

This story is so fantastic. I praise your imagination. I love the plot and how each character developed. It surprised me to find out the Qunari are the masterminds. I thought they wanted to involve with bas as little as possible. Anyway, well done!

I think your Hawke's reaction to fights in DA2 was very similar to my own... 'Not another damn wave of mobs! Rage!' xD Interesting so far, Anders is still his cuddly-adorable-slightly-tortured-self! I really want to hug him, but I doubt your Hawke would approve! Oh well...

Jumping onto the bandwagon late... because thats the kind of thing I do, heh... I must agree with Anders though, disheveled bearded and ship-wrecked Hawke gives me very nice mental images, haha! Have I said before that I adore generic maleHawke's beard? I really do! Anyway, you're portrayal of Anders makes me want to hug him and tell him everything will be ok :)

Looking forward to reading more, once time permits!

Amazing, exquisitely amazing. I loved the whole idea of the fic. It had everything I could imagine, and an extremely well-written plot. The pairing of M!hawke/Anders is actually much harder to find than M!hawke/Fenris, and even much harder to find one so well done. My absolute favorite chapters were chapter 15 and 19. I loved the bath scene. It felt so romantic, and chapter 19 elicited the oh-so beautiful smut. Thank you, thank you, thank you for sharing *-*

I'm sorry I've been so late in reading, but this chapter was just beautiful, exactly how I always wished Anders and Fenris could eventually interact, and you did it without compromising either of their canon personalities. Well done!

i simply loved this story. it took me a few days to read and i found myself reading slower as i neared the end, wanting to drag the story out for as long as i could.

the characters in da2 i liked the most were anders (of course!), varric, bethany and avaline. in da1, they were alister, sten and shale and in da2a, anders and sigurn.

i would love to see more of this story line. maybe with the mages earning their freedom after long last. it would be very cool to blend characters together from all three games, though most likely difficult as well, but i think you're up to the challenge.

one thing i would like to see happen though is for anders and hawke to either retire to their own private island at the end or submit to the qun as long as anders didn't have to be bound to live there. i always did like the qunari and i like to believe that my hawke was always flattered when told that he was closer to the qun than he thought.

i hope that anders can visit justice in the fade to see if he is okay. they have some unfinished words for each other, i think. and anders may not like it, but without justice, the revolution may not have been possible.

thank you so much for writing such an amazing story and for posting it for everyone to enjoy. this story was fantastic and i am so happy that i found it. keep up the good work. there aren't enough m!hawke/anders stories out there.

Doh! I have no idea why I thought the Anders chapter was the last chapter! But colour me happy that I was wrong!

All these little snippets made me smile.

Fenris and Isabela! I love those two together! And is Alistair... *blinks* is Alistair flirting with Aveline! And the hornless qunari... is that Sten? I thought he was Sten the first time around, but I thought I was just being a little too hopeful.

And the Warden! With Morrigan! They're coming back? Yay!

Also, great ending with the wand. I'd actually wondered what would happen with it and I thought it would come up in the next Act, but having it at the bottom of the ocean is so much better. I really hope his decision doesn't come back and bite him in the ass though.

Thank you so much for writing this fic! And I so look forward to the next Act!

Beautiful.. I so can't wait for the next act!

I like the snapshots of how everyone ended up, nice little bit of (sort of) closure.

While I'm sad to see Act IV end, I'm hanging out for Act V. I do love me some Anders, and you're doing him justice (so to speak, lol) brilliantly. :D