I saw battle nexus... is this a rottmnt fanfic?

Hey! I really enjoyed your story ! You write very well and it was super captivating.:D

Flashback fight between Don and Leo is awesomely written.
Reminds me of the beginning of "Return to the NY" from original Mirage comics.

The first half is nothing special, but the "conversation with a mirror" itself is amazing.
Totally we can see how mangled Raph's mind is.

Ii

Wooooooaaaahhhhh okay. I see now. Did the doctor guy actually put a bug in him, or was that all metaphorical? Probably did. You know, that's quite similar to a medieval torture, where they trap a rat on top of your belly button and make it burrow through to escape.

Wonder why he saw Donnie though? Did Karai plan this, or is it all an unexpected side effect? Maybe he saw Donnie because they're in a laboratory setting. That, plus his pain and hallucinations, equaling evil Donnie?

I don't understand why they're playing along with him. Wouldn't that just make it worse? Cementing his brainwashing outside of the place of abuse?

Glad Leo gets some attention. He really needs some, poor guy. There's NO WAY he's fine after seeing his brother in that state.

ooooOOOooh wait what how did Karai train him like that? How the hecky... what even... I knew it was bad but not matching-personality bad.

Ooooooohh. Double thumbs up, you kept Raph in character. I hate it when fanfictions make characters OC. Good job

I just love how utterly bewildered Donnie is.

Heeeeey! So it was Raph! Heh, this should be interesting. First broken!Raph I've read.

This was an amazing story! It had feels, angst, action, and everything else that it takes to make a great story! I was in love from beginning to end! Thank you for sharing this with the world!

Uh, oh, Raphie! Great job on this story!

"Aren't we missing a Nazi soldier or something?" OMG! I had to slap my mouth to keep from laughing out loud there! My dad was in the room, and he woulda been all like 'whatchu readin?' Great chapter! Can't wait to read he rest!