Yes I can believe it. When I read it on Deviant art at the end of the chapter I was like (what the what is spared?) At that time I was a new transformer fan and bearly now anything about the transformers fandom.

Over all amazing story loved it. Now on to the sequel. XD

Ok I finally got around to reading my favorite chapter of this story. Were Knockout and Arcee makeup and save Breakdown the stupied M.E.C.H. people. I hate them so much but I love this chapter so much. My favorite part is from the beginning to were they go back to there basses.

Great chapter loving the story so much. XD

Finally took my forever to get around to reading this chapter. Cause my favorite chapter is 9 but this one is kinda boring even though it's filled with interesting information about Knockout, Arcee and Breakdown.

Now YAY on word To my favorite chapter TALIHOWE

Yeah that's one reason I don't like chapter 7 and maybe chapter 10. Whatever chapter is the "Oporation Breakdown" is the chapter I'm talking about. But yay the chapter where it's bassicly the episode is kinda boring (No afenss) Still great chapter.

This is a sweet chapter. I like how we see Breakdown and Arcee talk about what Knockout is do, and how worried Arcee is. Then we see that Knockout love her so much that he risks his paint job. As you now in the series Knockout doesn't risk anything for anyone, let alone care about anyone else besides him and Breakdown at times too.

Great chapter. ;)

Oh right I forgot that Breakdown is going to meet Arcee. And Yes Knockout does have an unhealthy obsession with Optimuses rims.

Ok now I'm clueless to what happens next. But I can't wait to get to chapter 9 when I read it on deviant art chapter 9 was my favorite. But my favorite part in this chapter is

("YOU BONDED WITH HIM that a pretty big detail to leave out") so funny I read it over and over like 5 time cause it was so funny. XD

Ok I forgot that Knockout and Breakdown talking was before Arcee and Ratchet's talk. Like I stayed I don't remember most of this story, but I loved it so much the frist time I read it I recommend this story to my older sister.

Now I do remember was the better or worse. (Better) I thought I it went right to Arcee in the bass when Ratchet finds out. But I was WRONG!

I first read this story on Deviantart about 3 years ago so now I'm reading it again to refresh my memory. But yay I don't remember a lot of it. :(

But why can't you continue it. I llllloooovvvveeee the story. Does sparked mean pregnant. What does helm and bond.

I love the story, and this is my second time reading it. Why can't you finish it, I would do it for other people. What does sparked mean because in the next chapter you said that arcee was sparked.

I HATE YOU FOR THIS HATE HATE HATE! What does sparked even mean! Peeeeeaaassseee add on to the stores

Pls do chapter 11 I want to know what happens?

mynamejeff