Hey loved the chapter. question why is prince vince a woman, and beetlejuice is back to normal?

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Nice chappy shiny star :D

Nice chappy Star :D I'm glad I could help :D Love it love it love it! :D looking forward to the next chappy! :D

I love it but you got the chapter name wrong... it's Lost Cause

YAY! Love it! :D Glad to help always :D

this chapter was great, I love how the snakes tried to rape Beetlejuice. I feel really bad for him, considering he is being targeted. I don't think he should even be there. I do think Lydia was overreacting a bit. By the way when is he going to turn into a man.

Did you get the email I sent? Love the chapter and I guess you didn't like my christmas thing at the end. It looks good :D

I don't think Charlotte seems to unhappy about not marrying Bart... Also the flow is still good and constant :) now the Kevin has his anger out you see him getting more mature than his own father. :D

I love the flow of the story and that Kevin was showing just the right amount of ferocity. btw oats and water...they just invented instant lolz Love you and love this Star :D good work! :D

ooh... i read it backwards... :)

Mania chapter and I gotta read through again...and ease up on fuzzo a little...Wow... Never lost the shock value {hugz}

Man good story. i LOVE THE IDEA that in order for Beetlejuice to become a man he need true love first kiss.

O.O You went for the shock value big time... Awesome work! :D

I think when Bertha is talking to Claire you mean yawned instead of yarned. Instead of I make a bath try "I will make a bath..." or "I'll make a bath..." You did pretty well actually :D and the only other mistakes I saw were when "Bertha once has..." turn it into "Once Bertha's elder cousin had...", daja vu is really deja vu. I like the flow of the story! Loving the sexiness that Pru has going, respectful Cyclops is refreshing, just lots of awesome! :D love you shiny Star! :D