Reviews for Temptation
Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2018
Vanitas you should've at least Masturbate to get off your sexual frustration
BananaPeel67 chapter 1 . 7/23/2015
In Night XI, when Xion draws blood on Vanitas, I think you meant "masochist," not "emo." Being "emo" doesn't mean you get turned on by pain, that's being a masochist.

But otherwise, great story!
Falcon Disciple chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
THAT was Excellent. 3 things.
1: poor Vanitas getting blue balls like that
2: WTF was he reading? Must've been one Hell of a read.
deserve a HIGH 5!
oblivionkeeper23 chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
Oh, Xion is so evil in this story!
AJ chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Woot! This was awesome! I should torture my future husband like this ;) XD
BlackWingsXIII chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
the ending is amazing ! good job :D
ceasefire21 chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
continue! got hooked with this!

fW21
Tabuu99 chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
I love it so much that I can stop reading it. Keep up the good work bro.
IenSchemer chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Man oh man, Vanitas being tortured by none other than Xion? :D this is just lovely.. Never thought of this pairing but I love it now cause of this story.. _

5/5
LovelySantorski chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
beautiful
ThePlaceWhereBeautyLies chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
I loved the story, sad that it was a one shot...:) And I am also sorry that it took me this long to write a review. I'm also sorry that a story like this has only Eight...Well, nine reviews now. Should have more...
The Sand Cookie chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
This is really awesome and cool, I never actually considered this paring, but you wrote it well! Keep up the good work!
Magikbyrd chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Tempted by his wife?
WeDidItForTheDead chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Oh my goggles, that must have been torture. But he's giving as good as he got so...
Q-A the Authoress chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
Who knew Xion could be so seductive and Vanitas' revenge in the end was a nice end to this oneshot.
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