Ok, this time i made an account, please refer to me as a zat or i will not respond.
I'm bored so I'm going to go anD grief everyone i meet who write about spyro.
The characters in this story are gay.

Oh no, what did you do with this one! I thought the last one was quite bad but this, this is like some random dying cow's butt looked at some paper and the paper decided to mirror it. I think you probably should elaborate more on the sleepover and I really wonder why I sat here for 10 minutes to read this and then 5 minutes to tell you all this but I hope it helps you write better.

P.S Write better could be translated to DON'T EVER WRITE AGAIN!

That was fun I like it! Do more please!

no! what are you doing spyro's girlfriend should be cynder! :C

heheh "How about you, Hunter?" "NO!"

Okay I'm aware this story is like 9 years old and you will probably do nothing to it but I might as well.

This was...bad I'm sorry.

First, it's a script fiction, which is against the rules.

Second, it is ridiculously short. Only 3 scenes? And you ended it on an incredibly awkward note. Want to elaborate on what happened at the sleepover (though I don't think you can catch different gender sleepovers often)?

Now to the actual story.

Darla is really an uneccasary character. Whether this the legend or the original the girlfriend is always speculated to be Elora(I think) or Cynder.

How many kids are in the class, at that how long is it? Three are characterized, only ONE actually did anything and afterwards it's done?

All in all, this is very messy. I doubt you'll do anything about it though. You're what 31? I expect alot more from a person of that age.

~Order of the Concritters~

Well done! ... although I was a bit skeptical about the school part like it was going to be a mash up with Spyro and some other character's you've come up with, this was cute.

And I also realized this one was made around 2002 so folks who had reviewed saying Cydner was Spyro's gf (which she is as of NOW) read the darn date of when this story had been published! XD

Well done!

cynder is spyro's girlfriend you mother fu*kers! pisss! dan dellaway sits at home, with his ass up his ass

Omg little hanger but I like it :3

that was just stupid

great story I loved it, was the best thing i've ever read. Words can't describe the love I feel for it. It was great, just great, like puke up a donkeys ass, what a shitty ass load of mutor fucking bull fuck, in other words, that was terrible, I don't know why I sat through that shitty ass load of god damn bull fuck. a guy with no emotions is more entertaining than that. God i've read some bad things in my life but this piece of monkey fuck is the worsed, I mean I'd rather eat snotty diarea vomitted out of a buffalo's dick and if you think I was serious before than suck my huge 80! please review my review thanks... eh:)

You should continue!

A bit short, could use some more details, some brighter words, some more eplanation of some things, stuff like that.

aw. i loved it!

i hope u give hunter more lines :)

Amazing. I have no idea you would came up with this. Great story! :)