Amazing

amazing, loved it!

I found this awhile ago but sort of lost it before I finished reading and could review. As you can see, I found it again. I'm not sure how I feel about Uhura and Bones, but I'm guessing you kind of did that to get them both out of Spock and Jim's way. That aside, I really like your writing style, and I like that you built up to the hook up.

Start up the middle was too busy for me, but slowly it gets fascinating. Once it gets emotional between the two of them it was breathtaking.
At the end of the story, the only thing that filled my mind with longing and sadly, this is how I long for someone to love me and admire me this way.

Just epic! Lots of complexity, action and lovin'. Brilliantly written and so engaging, from the characters to the conversations to the plot.

Sooo good!
Thanks for sharing!

really awesome, I loved all the emotions and the protectiveness. The only thing wrong I notice is that it says Spock doesn't sweat but mentions him sweating?

Beautiful story.

I don't know why but when he says "you can putter around the ship" I always laugh... I love that line so much.

Anyway, I really like this story and always have, but don't think I reviewed before. Guess we will find out when I hit the 'post review', eh? Anywho, this was a wonderful story and I loved every minute of it! Thanks for sharing!

Xcellent!

Ah! That was so good! I enjoyed every part! But holy fudge, why was the whole thing in one chapter? Haha
Fudging delicious

I love this story. Every single little thing about it. So much so that I am going to put it on my kindle so I can read it when I don't have internet access. Now here in lies the biggest problem with that: it is going to ask me what author name to put in and I am unsure what you want me to use? Do you want me to use your actual name or the one you used on this website? Please let me know at your earliest convenience so I may put it on my kindle as soon as possible. I can't seem to get enough of this story and would like it to be on my kindle which I always have with me and has a MUCH better battery life than my phone.

You did an absolutely fantastic job with this! Your writing is excellent and you did an amazing job at keeping everyone in character. This entire story sent tingles down my spine. Your plotline was thorough and you developed Spock and Kirk's relationship slowly and beautifully. Great job with this, I really enjoyed it! :)

Absolutely fantastic!

This was absolutely perfect!