I loved this - you really captured Liz's character perfectly!

That's pretty much what happened in the manga :/

Pretty much your story is way too similar to the manga

I like when you write on the other characters from Soul Eater. Mostly cause it gives me a nice break from all the SoMa that gets churned out. And I do quite like all of their stories. The other characters I mean. And yours too. Add em together and makes for some real good shit. :3

This is great...I like the Thompson Sisters and Kid fanfics...

I loved this fanfiction! Kid, Liz and Patti are my favourite characters in Soul Eater. Well done!

3 so beautiful. It brings their story alive, and I love it. Great work :)

Remi

This is probably my favourite kidxliz story, and I've read quite a few! It was so adorable, and realistic in a way.

That was beautiful :') Even though I'm more of a Soma shipper, I really love reading fics about these 3, the relationship they have is just amazing and gives me really happy feelings XD (It also helps that KidXLiz is like, my second favourite pairing next to Soma)

AWE! So sweet! I love these kinds of stories! ;)

Wow, this is flipping amazing. Awesomesauce.

A decent story. I've become a great fan of your work. I just finished, what was it called again? Appreciation? Where Maka is kidnapped. That story made me cry. Unfortunately, I read it right before this one and due to this the emotional impact of this story was weaker. I liked this story still though. I would've liked to have seen it last a little longer though, it was too short in my opinion. I would have liked to see Liz's attitude change over time and what caused it. But, thank you for the story.

Great story! I love these fics showing how the infamous Thompson sisters became the next generation's Death God's weapons. :) Beautiful last scene, by the way. ;)

Thank you for that, very well written fanfiction. It was great, and I really like how you showed the sister's progression through the story. It was great, and the ending made me go awwww. The idea that Kid makes Patty happy and therefore makes Liz happy is also amazingly well conveyed here, and that added a lot to their relationship. Really great writing, keep it up!

~Arik

this story is so great!

is it sad that i nearly cried?

great job!

I like this!

I think I'm the only one that noticed, but even Liz's name is symmetrical. L is the 17 letter, i is the 9, and z is the 26. 17926. 2626. Unless you use Elizabeth, in which case it wouldn't work. It doesn't work with Patty's name either.

~Kitty