i neeeeed moree
the feels are killing me

I thought he was naked? They just- ... did he even put on clothes?

This is SO GOOD! I usually don't like the thought of human!Pikachu, but this is awesome and so very sweet! You have to update!
Also, you should really write Pikashipping with Pikachu as his normal self. Please?

Awesome story plz plz plz plz updateeee plz

enjoyable and cute. yes i still read pretty much everything yu post.

I'm so happy to hear that you're continuing this! I read this a while ago and I was sad to know it hadn't been updated in almost two years, but to know you haven't given up on this really made me smile. I can't wait until the next chapter! :-)

Why is the pokémon one of those gays

And guess what? You updated this two years ago! Remember that little mock entrance where u pretened to be clueless about your update gap! Goddammit you're an idiot.

Update dammit!

OMG! That was freaking awesome! I love this fanfic! You are really brilliant in bringing out both Ash and Pikachu's thoughts and feelings! Damn you! How could you write so well?
Anyways,this is one of the best Pikashipping fanfics ever! Please update... I am dying for it!
Please update quickly! Good job! Keep it up! Good luck for the next chapters! Hope you would update soon!

So damn awesome

I love it, such suspense! Please keep up the great work.

You should keep writing.

please continue!

PLEASE CONTINUE! IF YOU'RE STUCK THEN USE TEAM ROCKET!
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IT HELPS! CONTINUE!

Please continue this is a really good story and it be a shame if it wasnt followed out to the end. I can't wait to read more -