*pain au chocolat
(im sorry i had to)

This story has so much potential

I’d love to read more, please write more.

It’s different to most story’s out there, I think kinda more realistic too, when it comes to emotions and the reactions around Gaara.

It was brief, but what I could gather was that you a good hold of sentence, and story story structure. The lines of text were easy to read and it was clear what was happening while also giving a mystery to ponder on. I liked it.

Please continue updating, InebriatedMuse! I look forward to the next chapter!

Please continue updating!

This is good! Hope you update soon!

I hope you find your muse again and continue this sometime, even if it's years after the fact. It's a good start to something that could be pretty darn good. You've got a decent grasp of spelling and grammar for the most part. It's always interesting to speculate how people from different 'universes' would react - I love a good crossover, and there's nothing I like better than a good Gaara crossover.

update pllllllleeeeeease!

Can't wait to see where this goes XD
I really enjoyed this story so far so keep up the good work!
(Side note:pleasepleaseplease don't make this into a GaaraxHermione fic))
Okay...
..Imgoingtogonow..
Bai!

Great. I like it :D Will you be writing the following chapter?

I really enjoy your story and I hope that you continue it. I absolutely adore Gaara as a character and I think that you are portraying him very well. I hope that you update soon :) Btw I love the way you write it's very descriptive and full of details but atthe same time straight to the point, I love it.

This story is really nice. :)
Please update again!
:D

Hmm... I'm interested. I hope you don't take this HermionexGaara thing too far. I think that would be annoying. But I will be following.

Next chapter pleaseeee ,

When are you going to update?