I um.. kinda love the story, it makes me interested.

But I'm very sorry that I'm a little bit disappointed at the end of the story :( like you were rushed to finish so you just write the ending plot T.T huhuu

Nevertheless, I appreciate your way to end the story instead of just leave it hanging ;-;

And yes, I love this story :D Wish you'll rewrite or edit the last chapter !

Thankyou for writing this nice fics, Author-san! o

Well to tell you the truth I am pretty sad that this isn't going to continue, but then if you don't even like the pairing anymore then where's the inspiration! So it might actually be a good thing that you're not going to continue it. Thank you for actually telling us the ending instead of saying "i can't write anymore so make up you'r own ending!" :P I hope you can sort out everything in your life D and hopefully there's someone as creative as you on here to continue writing this. Have a good life! :)

awesome

lolz. And my eyes are blue...?

Maybe. -.-'

My friends say my eyes are dark blue around the rim, light blue, and then gold around the pupil. Oh, well. Thanks for putting me in.

O_O WTF! What the actual fuck! Oh, by the way, the story's great so far. Love the fact Roxas and Axel have admitted their feelings for each- WAIT! Isn't Roxas 10, like Sora? And Axel is like... 299 years older? Nice : Oh, the WTAF was because I read the kiss scene between Riku and Sora and noticed something... disturbing. And I quote: "A little scared, he opened his mouth a little bit, feeling RIKU'S THONG FINDING ITS WAY IN." O_O ...

Love Tarner :

yay another chapter! oh no who grabbed him? i dont know why but i have a feeling its Terra...or maybe someone else lol!

Really, the time's not all that bad. I'm a LOT worse.

OMG THIS STORY IS AWSOME i love it so much 8D it has twist and turns gezz im on the edge of my seat really i feel off my desk a few times reading this its just astonishing please keep up the good work

this chap was awesome! im a history person so i loved the flashbacks! cant wait to find out what was in the box, and i feel bad little sora couldnt find riku

hmmmmmmmmmm I wonder if ven is going to be the past Roxas.(if he has a past self)

HaHA! Vanitas woot! Bit unexpected, but i can't WAIT for the next chapter! Yosh!

Sora is off on his mission alone! have fun!

lmao marly is a zombie! domatic background music what can happen next?