Only wish there is more. Sad

Again, the whole reset thing is highly unnecessary. Kirika didn't change much but my stupid brain keeps telling me that chp1 Kirika is dead and somone else has taken her place. IT TURNED ME OFF SO HARD!?

I was enjoying this until the damn reset... why oh why?! I want Kirika! Not just a plain Shirou minus a dick!

god dam fabulous, loved Kirika's reality marble incantation, just so great

The hard reset was annoying. Actually thought we would get something interesting but instead she gets reset back to factory default.

Wait... Shiny Green Stones? GaoGaiGar?

Ojalá lo continuarán esta muy interesante

oh i hate LIFE WHY DO ALL GOOD STORY END WITH CLIFF HANGER

why is archer scared of a little lizard i dont know but i do know that he has a bunch of copy something a dragon slayer weapon

Tell me Kirika," Kirei suddenly stopped and got an annoyed look on his face. "No, I suppose that you wouldn't remember anything about the servants themselves. Let me instead ask you which of these two you would think easier to dispatch. Your average, everyday human, or a dead apostle ancestor."

Fate and Tsukihime are different places. So I don’t know if DAA exist in Fate.

The writing focuses a lot on Kirika, and coming up with situations and antics involving her.. Which detracts from the grail war

1. Summoning Two Sabers - why? For a joke?
2. Passing Prana - it was a little funny the first time, but the joke wore out it’s welcome - it’s done just to get her to kiss saber
3. Archer and Lancer not fighting - again, it’s not very serious

Other than that, we are considering the characters currently in play: Sakura - jealous of Kirika? Shinji - master of Rider. Run and Kirika - Team Tohsaka-Emiya. Lancer - his master could be either Bazett or Kotomine. Illyasaviel - Master of Berserker.

Yet to see Assassin, Caster.

Overall I am unhappy with the tone this story currently has. I would prefer it be more serious.

I love this story. Please update it. It's so well written and there aren't enough good female!shirou fanfics out there. Anyways, keep up the great work!

I'm not entirely sure what happened, but I don't think that the fic is dead, so much as… well… I don't really want to say it.
Alyeris hasn't posted anything on Beast's Lair since 2012, and they seemed to be pretty diligent in their updating. I suspect that the author has been incapacitated to some degree. At least, I hope that's the worst-case-scenario.

Personally, I don't think anything will ever surpass the GAR of Archer's Unlimited Blade Works.
However, this comes decently close.

i loved this story is there any way to find more of it

Kirika needs to just woman up and accept she's gayer than rainbows so she can get down to the much more important business of being happily, lovingly in lesbians with the truly prodigious flock of women trying to get in her skirts.

... ah, this hasn't updated in over five years. I suppose it may never come to be. orz