| Reviews for White Water |
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NaruHinaFanboy chapter 1 . 4/12/2011 Nicely written my friend I really enjoyed reading this nice GenkixHolly lemon fic. XD |
RockyRoadSmith chapter 1 . 4/11/2011 I read this before going to class and I had a hard time concentrating because I was still thinking about this story and it's theme. XD Aw, poor Genki! I can totally see him having trouble fighting with his internal and physical desires for Holly. I can only imagine how awkward it must have been for him. Holly is more assertive in the ways of pleasure than usual routines, though I know Genki wasn't complaining about her way of helping him out with his "predicament". The sex scene was also very well written and detailed. I liked how it wasn't rushed or randomly thrown into the story. You wrote out a perfect lead into the situation that worked very well. If Suezo ever found out there would be hell to pay, though! Part of me hopes that you'll dish out another one-shot about Tiger talking with the couple about their relationship. Great story! |