This is so good, your writing is like, tangible! You're so good at writing feelings, both physical and emotional.

okay i love you HOW DO YOU WRITE SO WELL *shakes you* TELL ME

hot and heartwarming. Welcome to HA Tori

Waao jaja me encantó. Describes de maravilla las partes eroticas

Lmao the whole time I hoped she would stay in character and she did. That acting though

Well thanks you for this little piece of art, I found it quite enjoyable to read :)
And this is the first fanfiction I read that portray the characters as they actually are and not as they were wanted to be.

So cute :3

I like it. Good job.

I love this twist on the episode. Great writing and imagination. I love it. Thanks for this.

I absolutely love this, both the story and the creativity! Amazing from one writer to another.

Yup... Offically Loved It

Oh my god, that was incredibly hot! I almost wish it were real, but you know it's thanks to your incredible imagination that these sexy stories get written. ;)
Great job! I really enjoyed reading this story! Jade and Tori were extremely well characterized, and this was a very captivating story! Awesome work! Keep up the fantastic writing and good luck!

u r awesome

Love it.

Amen to this story.

I was reading this on the school bus, and the whole time I was just waiting to see who would ask what it was. I really wanted someone to ask so that I could tell them that I was reading smutty gay fanfiction. Nobody asked, but I loved the story!