| Reviews for Lullaby of a Youkai |
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CloudZzFluffyBedsOfWhite chapter 7 . 2/26/2017 OMG Loved it! This is the first story I found where Naruto and Sasuke's bond holds and he leaves with him, (not for lack of trying, mind you, I searched a lot where those to leave together, so any recommendations please send my way) Loved the lullaby, I had the whole lullaby on replay in my mind since i first read it in the first chapter, which was great in the last and very fitting - I'm just hoping i can get rid off it soon and not be humming for the next days, the inevitable and random humming of it would lead to awkward questions .' . Mothering femKyuubi planning to get herself a nice son-in-law was brilliant. The writing was good, not too descriptive but that's fine in action fics where to much descriptions disrupts the story flow. The negative: I really wish there'd be more between chapter 6 and 7. Where is that awaiting first meeting between the Otokages and Konoha at the Suna Chuunin exams, their reactions, the banshee's outrage of Naruto stealing her Sasuke-kun out from under her stalker ass. It felt really rushed at the end making the story fall a little flat. It's like all the juicy revenge and outrage was cut out and just skipped over and talked about briefly, a shame since I was really looking forward to it. All in all, i enjoyed it just wished it was longer and more fleshed out, at least you finished it and didn't let me hanging with an incomplete abandoned stories ( authors can be so cruel T.T). Anyway You got yourself a new fan, keep writing Off to reading your TimeTravel/Re-Do HP fic - I never liked Ginny, Molly and Dumbles, tyrannical Hermione ... I'm so exited! |
Jj chapter 7 . 12/17/2016 Aw that was good loved it |
okisturt chapter 7 . 12/4/2015 Great work on this :) I REALLY liked, that you didn't give em all a happily ever after, like most authors who start with betrayal do *gags* |
RayvnAshes2 chapter 7 . 7/31/2015 That Cherry Blossom Bitch. Accurate, I like it. :) |
Animeangellover2 chapter 7 . 5/25/2015 Awesome fic! I like how the plans were worked out and the people that played their part in them. I also liked the length of this story. Long enough to be enjoyable and want more, but not too long to feel as though it dragged on. Great job! |
ilanit.harary chapter 7 . 5/25/2015 love it! |
ShadowTomes chapter 7 . 7/9/2014 It was awesome. Seriously, I love it. I kind of wish it was longer so the story wasn't finish but what are you going to do. Thank you for finishing the story. |
Nightleaf chapter 7 . 6/3/2014 So awesome good job |
shannieann chapter 7 . 12/23/2013 I've got to say that this is one of the most amazing stories of have ever read on here. I especially love the lullaby Kyuubi sings. keep up the good work. |
stubs1101 chapter 7 . 11/7/2013 this was amazing! |
Veno7913 chapter 7 . 8/8/2013 is their any chance of you posting the whole Lullaby as its own chapter? |
Runadaemon chapter 7 . 8/6/2013 Wow! This was well-written, well-planned, and well-executed! Of course there's questions, and a few wishes for more details, especially little daily-life-blurbs, but I am impressed, and so happy to find a story like this one! Lately the stories just haven't had this level of... cohesiveness, you know? Thank you so much for the wonderful story! I greatly enjoyed it. Happy Writing! |
Guest chapter 7 . 8/6/2013 good story interesting but good u added a nice amount of back story it really fleshed it out |
Animelvr chapter 6 . 9/9/2012 This fic rox! Totally luv this idea; keep up the good work! |
o76o chapter 6 . 8/24/2012 reeeally good :);) luv it33and hope you finish soon;) |