| Reviews for Captive |
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   ShortNinja13 chapter 6 . 1/25/2013 I really like this story and I'd like to know what happens next! Please update soon! |
| Sasoripuppet chapter 6 . 12/2/2012 omg,this is good,I'd love to her reactions,she'd get angry and yell at him,please update soon |
| Annerizu-san chapter 6 . 9/8/2012 Duuuuude...man...Deidara's a freaking baka in this case...This is cool... |
| skullchildforever chapter 5 . 7/19/2012 love this story! keep. updating...please? |
| Angelfang chapter 1 . 9/17/2011 More :D |
| deeb0123456789 chapter 3 . 8/28/2011 Looks like Nariko has a crush! Awesome story! Update ASAP! |
| deeb0123456789 chapter 2 . 8/15/2011 Love it! Update ASAP! |
| Chrysantimony chapter 2 . 6/5/2011 i really enjoy this story and i hope you will continue it. The beginning is really strong and it could be a well-developed story if you continued it |
| Chocolate Pencil chapter 2 . 5/30/2011 Yay! You updated! Pretty good so far. Can't wait for more |
| Koneko-chan chapter 2 . 5/30/2011 Awesome! :3 I hope that you'll add more chapters. |
| may11101 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011 CNT WAIT 4 NXT CHAPPY! :D |
| Chocolate Pencil chapter 1 . 5/15/2011 When I started it, I was worried that Nariko would turn out to be a Mary Sue, because of certian elements, ie tragic past, weird hair, immortality,etc. But after I read it again I decided that she wasn't a Mary Sue. She has a believable character and the story kept me wanting for more. You may have to be careful about her becoming a Mary Sue though. Please don't take this as a flame, I'm really enjoying your story so far! Please update! |
