Omg This was adorable and the ending was HOT XDD And there are implied Fujoshi XDD YAYYY （）

that was yummy X3 I loved it. my only thing is it switched a bit too much for my liking. but hey it works. and at one point i got confused cause it switched with out saying so.

D'awwww that was cute! This story was really well written and I loved it! From the begining to the end, I wanted to keep reading and find out what happened next XD

This is defiantly one of my favorite fanfictions!

Aww, that was cute. I enjoyed it. You wrote the IMing very well too. :)

However at one part I think you mixed up the POVs, or forgot to put you were transitioning to a new one, since at one part it started out as Len's POV then abruptly switched to Kaito's.

I loooved this fanfic _ I thought it would be really screwed up with a seme Len but you pulled it off perfectly! In the beginning/ middle (the part where they meet up) I read the description of Len's clothes and thought it sounded like the Len version of Matt from Death Note. Was it intentional or did it just come (brilliantly) out that way? Thank you for writing this! 3 * LenKai forever ;) *

Awesomeness. I love how Akaito suggested Kaito go on yahoo messenger xD

woooo! so so so ! XD hahahaha.. nice one ! XD XD XD XD XD

Just awesome :D I love the seme Len so much x3 *favs story*

Its so cute!

Make an Ongoing one? PWEEASEEEEE?

But in the makin out part in Len's POV I kinda got confused.

This part :

"Len. I. Love. You." I bite at my lower lip, then continue, "I have for some time now. I think it was when I first saw you while we were freshmen. I listen to you singing in the shower after gym, I sneak glances while you change your clothes and-"

Is this Len saying this stuff to Kaito OR Kaito saying this stuff to Len? x_x Confused*

then after that Paragraph it suddenly turned to Kaito' POV OTLL

Which was very confusing since it was in Len's POV .

TJHIS SO AWESUMMMMMMM

MAKE AN ONGOINGGGG DXXX

woah...that's like one of the best oneshots I've read O_O so cute XDDDDDDDD and now I want to ya know fangirl over vocaloid because of this...good think it's AU XDD but really it's warning should be fluff~ iz so cuteeee *sqeels* hahaha... and I can soo see Len as that of a handsome non shota boy *sighs* hotness _

I love it!

this was a great fic LoL

but it is weird to see Len as Seme, and I didn't understand Rin's nickname

but anyway, that was an amazing fic :D

Awesome ..period

Yay, you finally published it! _