| Reviews for 233 Kelvin |
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   iEliteRoyale chapter 7 . 6/7 This story is so interesting and dreadful at the same time... I absolutely love it |
| iEliteRoyale chapter 5 . 6/7 Things are getting JUICY |
| iEliteRoyale chapter 4 . 6/7 Aww Ed and Roy have the cutest little relationship |
| iEliteRoyale chapter 3 . 6/7 Omg Ed is SUCH a nuisance... I surprised Roy can still be able to keep his cool! |
| iEliteRoyale chapter 2 . 6/6 Ahhhh... Why do I feel like this is the peace before the storm?! I love your pacing and insights on the characters, and I can't help but feel that things are gonna go ham! |
| MiuraWtr chapter 12 . 4/3 aww so cute and heartwarming thanks for writing this! and so, the theme of this story is...Ed and a bunch of kids then Roy Ed and a bunch of kids |
| MiuraWtr chapter 3 . 4/3 so far so good |
| Sylphrena33 chapter 12 . 5/20/2018 I really like this. I think you portrayed both Roy and Ed's characters really well. I especially like the epilogue. It's well written and wraps the story up nicely. Great job with this. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/12/2017 i read the first half over on AO3, second half over here x3 great fic! you stuck very close to cannon, and i really loved the story thank you for writing and sharing -ZeyTheFox- |
| manga.geek.3 chapter 12 . 12/1/2016 aw, this was a brilliant story. well done! loved it! :D |
| LeChick chapter 4 . 12/30/2015 The fluff is so strong on this story :D |
| LeChick chapter 1 . 12/30/2015 Hawkeye knowing what Mustang would do before he even thought of it was both hilarious and totally in character |
| Colliequest chapter 12 . 10/20/2015 I remember reading this fanfiction...two years ago? Maybe longer? Anyway, I remember loving this story a lot and finally came back to read the last two chapters. I especially love the ending to this chapter, how it settles things so nicely. |
| gihihi chapter 2 . 10/2/2015 okay, okay, usually dont review, cuz I'm to lazy, but here I go, do have something to say :3 beforehand, so far I really like your story, the characters are, well, in character . cant say very much about the plotline yet, since Im just in chapter two, but it seems promising so far . but now you made me feel depressive, having Ed oft all people say big girls were unattractive *sobIm 180 cm tall so that really gets to me xD) well, maybe, if I dont feel to lazy, I'll leave a proper review when Im done reading this nice pretty story |
| seireidoragon chapter 12 . 7/13/2015 This was a wonderful story that had great bonding moments between Ed and Roy. Great job and I loved the ending. |
