Reviews for Guarded: Old Version
princesstaranee chapter 3 . 2/8/2012
Hmm, I'm glad that you're revising this; your writing has improved a lot and version 2.0 has a darker undertone to it, which I like. I'm going to keep reading this version, though, because I'd like to be able to compare the two.

Tara xx
Parvati48 chapter 5 . 1/27/2012
Uh I think you mixed up you stories because this is chapter one of your new version of guarded. You might wanna fix that.
Parvati48 chapter 4 . 1/27/2012
Well the letter she got was a bit foreboding. Glad she is sort of getting used to Scorpius and also glad that she is finally taking this all seriously. Good job. :)
Parvati48 chapter 3 . 1/27/2012
Well this is going to be interesting to read haha. The way Wes and Rose were talking at dinner made me cringe, I hate it when couples are overly lovey dovey it weirds me out haha. Good job. :)
Parvati48 chapter 2 . 1/27/2012
Lol yeah I already like this version better haha. Scorpius is amusing. I can't wait to read her explanation of the problem to Wes haha. Good job. :)
Parvati48 chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
This story seems alright so far already, why rewrite it? Anyways I kind of like this beginning better anyways but oh well. Good job. :)
anon chapter 6 . 1/23/2012
don't put the story in as "complete" if it's not finished.
UnlimitedThoughts chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
Wow... that was a big change... ughh the italics man(?) is creeepppyyyy :PP

i think you should keep it at T, but in the summary make a comment on the side saying "maybe M" or something like that...

anyways goood job! :D

can't wait for scorpius to show up :)
TheMapNeverLies chapter 4 . 11/19/2011
Wow! I think this story has got a lot of promise! It's been months since you updated and I would LOVE to continue reading this story! I'm excited to see where the plot goes, and how the relationship between Scorpius and Rose advances! Please continue with this story ASAP! Thanks!
flyingonwingedreams chapter 4 . 11/12/2011
I'm loving this story, scorose, is my favourite pairing. Ever. cant wait for another chapter
Shubhs chapter 4 . 9/29/2011
The plot has been used a lot but I like the thought of a very sexy, smouldering Scorpius. XD :P
burnedxout chapter 4 . 9/13/2011
hey you need to update this (: just saying.. hehe i love all your stories though!
JustMeMarissa chapter 4 . 8/4/2011
Wooowoooo, i like this story! :D

haha, I just sound like a 5 year old :P

xxx
iwantmycupcake chapter 4 . 7/27/2011
I really do like all the tension in this story- how Rose isn't taking the situation seriously at first, but how she soon realizes that she really is in trouble.

Update soon, please!

-iwantmycupcake
GallagherGirl18 chapter 4 . 7/21/2011
Great story update!
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