| Reviews for Spiraling Destiny |
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Digitalreaper360 chapter 8 . 8/22 this is a great story. Hamuko's character is interesting and unique than other fanfics with her own ups and downs. hopefully you will continue this fic |
goesabramss chapter 8 . 10/16/2019 nice |
ENDDRAGON369 chapter 1 . 5/6/2019 Minato and Mitsuru |
ShinyKyu chapter 8 . 12/13/2018 Damn, it’s been a while since the last update. It’s finally starting to reach the climax, so I hope you do something soon. |
ShinyKyu chapter 7 . 12/12/2018 Why Hamuko wonders if she can’t be a bride anymore? Isn’t that easy? It’s the general ‘she thinks she’s ‘unclean’ and therefore has no right to be a ‘pure’ bride anymore’ or something along those lines. It’s a slightly cliche thing, so I don’t know why people wouldn’t get it. |
ShinyKyu chapter 3 . 12/12/2018 Who would I want to be stuck in a room in for an hour with? Definitely Minato. As a fellow introvert, we’ll both just mind our business (quietly reading, listening to music through headphones, or playing on a handheld console), or possibly listen to music together. |
redacted987 chapter 8 . 11/14/2018 Awesome story! :) |
Raith chapter 8 . 7/17/2018 Will still be hoping. Good luck. |
Xuan Tian Shang Ti chapter 8 . 8/24/2017 Hey I just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying this story, so thanks for writing it. As for whether to adopt it out or not, I'm thinking no, you're a really good author and all I think you need is a little inspiration. If you're having trouble making this the more serious piece then add some more comedy, and if you can't think of comedic stuff, then add some more serious things. You're an extremely talented author and I'm really happy to read this, so I hope that you can find some inspiration in a drawer somewhere, but if you can't then that's fine too. Hope everything else is going ok for you :3 |
Equatic Puzzle chapter 8 . 5/1/2017 That last moment when aigis cradles Minato on her lap, that very memory tarnished by the reaction of this reality's aws becoming hostile to his presence. Heartbreaking to day the least. I feel bad that Elizabeth took his spot as the great seal...that is quite sad as well |
LucythePir8 chapter 8 . 3/29/2017 Ouch, I know how it feels to lose interest in a game. Actually, it's vice versa, I was making Fire emblem awakening fan fic for a while but i started to replay persona. Crazy huh? Anyways I'm currently working on Persona so don't worry. I try to at least complete my story. But life is a bitch. Anyways, good luck and hopefully you'll update soon. Love the characters interaction but I wish there was more Minato foreshadowing |
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 8 . 11/25/2016 Great story, amazing fanfic, please update soon! |
Masterx01 chapter 8 . 9/23/2016 Well, this wasan interesting one... I like this fic, is way better than the another one with the same idea... that reset one. I hate the personality of that Minato... so angsty, stupid and like the female MC put it, he is a jerk and a shameless womanizaer... D: i like more the personality of this Minato althought i sometimes feel as if he dont came from a future alternate dimention due him him mantaining a very low profile in aspect... an talking about the fic, well... at the beginning it was rather bland, that bunch of loose dialogues doesnt make any fic favors, altrought you really improve in that area and the lastest chapters were very good... althought i didnt like ithow you skip things leaving blank without any prior info... like this one with the tank shadow... another thing... why the female MC keep using her initial persona? Minato doesnt want to use another thing than Orpheus but to this point those initial personas arent nothing more than garbage... useless garbage... |
DannyPhantom619 chapter 8 . 8/29/2016 Awesome fanfic! -Hamuko X Minato! |
Guest chapter 8 . 5/10/2016 Update Soon |