I LOVED IT, I LOVED IT, I LOVED IT! AMAZINGNESS!

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek! LOVED IT! SO GOOD!

LOVED IT!

I love all your fanfics :)

Sweet ! :)

umm quick question... how on earth did you think of apple and mint? have you tried eating them together or something?

but anyway i loved it! very cute

mint and apples forever! awww... loved the ending!3

Love It!

I always imagined Rose would smell like oranges. Dunno why... Anyway, love the story!

I've been meaning to post a review, but Fanfiction hasn't been lettin me. But it really needs some work. It's missing a lot of details. Details make the story. I mean what does Al look like? How did Scorpius run into Rose? A bump on the shoulder or did he plow into her. Did he drop her stuff or stumble?

It also seems slightly childish, like the characters haven't been developed enough for their ages, which I'm assuming is 15-16. Most 15-16 year old kids dn' go running around and yelling. They are slightly more mature than that.

Another major issue is grammer. "I 'ran' into her" should read "I 'ran' into her." You might want to get a beta. It might really help you.

Not every yelling conversation has to be in caps. It gets annoying to read things in caps, well personality at least. For example (Yes, I did pull things out of your story and change them slightly):

"Ugh, why does he have to be so..." she trailed off, unable to think of the proper word.

"Malfoyish?" Al suggested.

"Yes! Malfoyish," she agree. "It's so annoying how he thinks he's so much better than everyone else."

Or:

"Why do you even like to hang out with Rose?" I questioned, before shoving more food in my mouth.

"Did you just call her Rose?" he demanded, raising an eyebrow at me.

I think I hit most issues. I'm truly not trying to discourage you from writing. This story has potential. I'm really just trying to get your story read more. I know fom experience that at the first sign of grammar, spelling, flow, organization, or lack of details issues, most people would stop reading.

I really hope this doesn't come off as mean/rude. That's truly not something I'm trying to achieve by reviewing. I'm trying to help you like I wish most of my old reviewers would have. I hope this helps. If you need any help, I'll be more than happy to help to in any way I can.

M.M

A little rocky at first...but I loved this last chapter :)

DUDE! Jess, why didn't you tell me you had an account? It's Isabel! :D I miss youuuu! Come back to ballet.

Back to the story. Very well written, I only spotted a few grammar mistakes. If you continue this (which you should), can I be your beta? :D That would be sooo funnn!

Read my story: All Was Quiet :D It's a PJO fanfic... ya. Only if you want. But I personally think it's my best work.

Anyways, I hope I get to see you soon! :D You're now on my author fava and alert list! :D

~isabel~

I like apples!

LOVED IT! could you make it into a two shot fic? or dunno make a short story? :)

im so confused whos perspective was that from like what the hell bitchtit and like what the hel!