damnit. the story sounds great.

that was good keep the chapters coming

Pleeeeeeaaaaaasssssseeeee update it's so good if you don't I'll hate you for life

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this is so good man i like it i hope sakura and shion becume a part of Naruto's harem

Awesome chapter, I hope that you update soon

This is a good fic and I hope you update please.

dude coutine u this and make it a naruxinoxhinaxkushina pls

plz write more

You have talent in writing but you need to finish writing some of your older stories they have great potential. The Final Win, Firery Desire, and Assasin of the Heart, Scorn and Revenge, and Trust Me are examples of stories your genius. You just need to finish them. If you update these stories I'll try my best to give you ideas. For example in the Final Win you could have Ash take the next step in the relationship with his girlfriends after the battle. In Scorn and Revenge Cynthia could recruit other girls to help Ash. In Assassin of the Heart Janine meets up with Ash at the league and fights with Dawn and other females for Ash's heart. In Firery Desire Flannery and Dawn are having a pokemon battle/catfight then team rocket takes advantage of this and uses a robot to capture the weakened pokemon and then as Ash chases after them he unlocks a new ability that allows him to save the pokemon. For Trust Me, Naruto meets Ino for lunch and Hinata foils Ino's attepmt to sudduce him by befriending him and joining them for lunch. After school Naruto meets up with one of his friends Ayame. She asks him to accompany her to a resturant like a date to her a social meeting to him until Ayame started to kiss him passionatly. She take him to her house to have a night of passionate only they where interupted by her dad as they entered the house. So Naruto heads home because it is a school night after talking to Ayame's dad.

it's a good story and who is in the harem? also I like minato and kushina pairing from naruto's ninja world. hope you don't hate me?

it seems like a good start... some parts were missing words though and that made it a little harder to follow. also you repeated some sentences, and some of the flash backs or explanations just didn't make sense at all. still though it starts out with a reasonable story line. I'll look out for your story to see how good the other chapters come out.

make another chapter because this story is messed up but its awesome so please update again

nice story so far but some ideas: keep it as naruto/kushina please, maybe have him fool around once with ino or something but i hate hinata :(

The 12 inch penis kinda ruined the first chapter for me as it's way to unrealistic, i hope you change this.

Otherwise it's a good start and i hope you update soon :)

normally I am not one for stories of modern world especially when it comes to Naruto unless it involve really in supernatural things...

though for this story I got to say somehow it caught my interest as the start seems good, add to the fact I am a dude who have an unhealthy obsession with the NaruXKushi pairings.

here are some suggestion that you are free to take if you want to:

1. keep the story as a NaruXKushi, because for one thing Harem/Polygamy don't work in Modern world.

already seemingly love Kushina very much from what I managed to catch on here, so there is no way he would be interested in another girl and he has to take in mind what Kushina would feel if he is fooling around with girls in anyway.

should have stopped her Ino from the start...I know he maybe a hormonal Teenager, but if he have a 'girlfriend' if you could call it that...so he should block all advances not just from her...but from any girl.

this is just a suggestion you are free to take them or leave them as it is your own story.