Aw, poor Soubi. It's sad what Seimei did to him.

I loved this story so much!

Brilliantly written, both in terms of style and plot. Good stuff!

Wow! This is a way cute story! I absolutely loved it. I've always thought of how much a difference there is between Ritsuka and Seimei (most definately in their almost opposite approaches toward Soubi), and this story displays it perfectly, with the touch of angst and drama necessary, while also giving us a quaint, lovely end. I also love the whole 'first person Soubi' thing, I don't tend to see that often in this fandom. Nice job! I hope to see more for you soon, Cereal :)

So cute and heartbreaking... ;; You captured Seimei perfectly, IMO, as you did Soubi. Though I wonder what could have possessed Soubi to say 'I love you' in the first place...

poor soubi!seimei was sooo evil & ristuka must seem like a fresh breeze of goodness!

Really good.

You write the finest Loveless fanfiction. They should publish your stories in a book and offer it as a prize to everyone who owns the complete manga :) They really are the best, honestly.