:O amazing! Great emotion and writting! :D

awww, how sad! :(

aww this is soo sad, i guess they are out of luck, and i don't think pein will let them leave akatsuki with out dieing :( awww this is soo cute i love it.

Nice story. It is so beautifully written. There should be more Sasodei fics like this. :)

Wow, that's so sad. ;( They can look, but not touch... If I were them I'd try my best to leave the Akatsuki. So sad. I love the fic, even if it is sad. You did a great job for something you had little to no time in writing. Pein does have a point with his relationship theory, but still, ninja life is short- they should be able to have what they want. Oh and by the way, Sasori's puppet's name is Hiruko, but very close though. Nicely done. _

-Nic