Reviews for Alfred Jones and the Overprotective Prefect
whitespiderlilly chapter 3 . 10/3/2013
Are you going to do all the books like this? Because I love this!
LobsterSalad chapter 3 . 2/24/2012
...!

Words cannot express how I have laughed over this. I mean, especially those "things that Alfred never discovered because Arthur was too overprotective" was hilarious. But that presentation was also hilarious. I really like your writing style, it's that kind of dry humour-it seems as if the author (you) is not trying to be funny when you actually are and it actually IS hilarious. So..

...!

Yeah.
jaistashu chapter 3 . 2/4/2012
... I predict that if Voldemort dares to touch a hair on Alfred's head, Arthur will decapitate him.
Statuess chapter 3 . 2/1/2012
Read the other parts on LJ but lost the final chapter. Utterly charming. :)
MelloandNear chapter 2 . 1/13/2012
Amazing! I loved it a lot :)
YaoiFanaticFreak chapter 3 . 1/12/2012
This! THIS! I- LOVE this! *eyes sparkle in excitement* I could really imagine their relationship in this! And- and- uke!America with seme!England.. D'aww~ Why in the hell I think of that?

*fav
Narufan4ev chapter 3 . 7/25/2011
Please sir, may we have some more? ;.; I really like this story!
hexa chapter 3 . 4/26/2011
awwww i can't wait for the sequeal, if there is ;A;!

This is love! X3
TheNinjaWangsta chapter 3 . 4/15/2011
I loved the ending, it's just so sweet. If you did a story with them older, I'd definitely read it. Alfred could get tired of Arthur's possessiveness, and then... Yeah. Well, I really enjoyed the story.
Tensai55 chapter 3 . 4/15/2011
Aww! That's so cute! I love how Dumbledore tries to get Alfred to do all the stuff Harry does in the books and how it backfires on him. Your version, while much less exciting (action-wise) certainly makes more sense. However, I think I'm suffering from sugar overload at the moment, so I'm gonna go work that off.

...more please?
vampiregirl878 chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
aww~~ Alfred sounds so adorable~ 3
TheNinjaWangsta chapter 2 . 4/9/2011
This is really cute, I like it, even though I'm not a big fan of Harry Potter.
The.Babble.Fish chapter 2 . 4/9/2011
Aww, how cute! I really like it so far!
bkkookmbhsj chapter 2 . 4/9/2011
I have to say I adore the descriptions of Alfred and Arthur's relationship.
Tensai55 chapter 2 . 4/9/2011
lmao That's awesome! Poor Arthur will never look at Quidditch the same way now that his "sweet baby brother" is on the team. I can just imagine him trying to put Alfred in actual armor in an attempt to protect him from the Bludgers.

...Matthew replacing Draco? I would have guessed Gilbert personally, but I suppose the whole hero-worship of older siblings-that-aren't-actually-siblings works too. Looking forward to the next installment! XD
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