Wow. W o w
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-

XD
A way better than fifty shides of gray. XD
That book sucks.
I loved this one. So intense.

Like the story hope to see more of your work

that. was. INSANELY. HOT. i had a pillow between my teethe as i read. the contrast between their sizes and his stubble and her softness is killing me, but in a good way.i dont think a cold shower would even stop what im feeling right now. wonderful piece, this one. thank you!

I guess my personal preference is for a bit more build-up before they start kissing and stuff, but I liked this.

I definitely love the descriptions. Hits that sweet spot. I also like the realism in many parts, such as his almost crushing her and then later falling out- that part made me laugh because I can totally relate.

Haha, I love how Monkey is characteristically short on words. “Wow” fits him quite well.

Hmm I think my only issue is… I don’t see Monkey shoving it in if there’s any question of her being a virgin. Also, at one point you use the word crotch and it stuck out because it was more vulgar than any of the other descriptions you used.

First of all I would like to say thank you for writing this wonderfully hot and delishiously sticky story. Like yourself I was left with the nagging ache of needing to know what happened to the pair. They had been together for so long and the romantic tension had built to nothing. Luckily though you wrote this beautiful lemon of a story.
Thanks for providing us fans satisfaction on the greatest video game couple. You have written one stonker of a story.

finally! im so happy somebody had the guts to do this! ive seen only a handful and i absolutely looove this game so thank you, my man!

Great story, pretty sure anyone would get beet red from reading this. Good job

Just brilliant
Perfect mixture of smut and romance

I am beet red as I read this! Actually very well written and you kept them in character instead of making it all about the smut. Nicely done

Nice to have at least one piece of dirty Monkey/Trip smut!
Thanks for writing.

Really great story ,great discriptions, and i agree enslaved is a good romance/action mix

Omgness! I LOVE YOU FOR THIS! Thank you! XD

Perfect. I knew there was something missing from this game :) What I liked about your story the most was that it wasn't just pure smut. It was beautifully written erotica. You should definitely write more... please?

Thank you. I love this game and I thought that your story was the one part missing from the experience. I have been checking back periodically for an enslaved, rated M story. I was so giddy when your story finally popped up.

Did you know you are the ONLY mature fic here? Oh my god it was delicious though... thank you, so very much, for filling in that little black hole. You've made my night. :-)