Great ending! That was an interesting story.

U should make more kidnapping. I like it when my fave character gets kidnapped,but only when the odds are really stacked against him/her

This was really good! I've been looking for a fanfic like this. I hope u make many more!:)

Cool! Love this twist and how you put back into the flow of the story : )

now juvia must get more clothing for gray sama because you like to misplace them. XD

Hi, I know it had already been three years, but I still somehow managed to find your story. Loved it :), although some of the characters seemed to be a bit OOC, namely Gray, Natsu and Jose, but just in details. I found it because: I love Gray I love doing bad things to characters II love doing bad things to Gray :). So thanks for this story, i think it was awesome.

Hi author! I love your fabric lol! AWESOME! :-)

Good story

Good job! Other than some spelling/grammer mistakes, it's really good. :) I love how you tied it into the original manga story line so well...not many fanfics do. And I absolutely love gray x juvia! I drew a chibi of her and gray (and Lyon). KYAAAAA! They are too cute! If you want to see it, check out my blog .com under the post "an unfortunate love triangle". Lol! Keep writing! Practice makes perfect. :)

uhm...is this it? only chapter 6? i hope not..i really hope not...coz i want this continued that would be great

best story in fairy tail fanfic section according to me...it satisfied me to the core..i just loved it.

this can't be completed! Please continue!

loves this

Wow

hate jose...