| Reviews for The Demon Who Lived |
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KamiOfKamis chapter 8 . 5/22 It was so good... |
KamiOfKamis chapter 8 . 5/22 Why did you never complete the story? |
TheAmazingGodEmperorBob chapter 3 . 1/4/2019 This is a great story but it has elements of the worst trope ever. evil character is also anti racist/anti bigot. This trope makes no sense. Not only is harry evil and has no qualms about messing with dudley brain, but he is also literally a demon! Maybe you are uncomfortable writing a character that is racist or apathetic to racism but then why in the 7 hells would you write an evil demon character that causally tortues children? This absolutely ruined my suspension of disbelief an makes no goddamn sense! |
stylo1 chapter 4 . 12/3/2018 why does he need to open the trapdoor? he can just stay intangible and phase right an through. this is one of those stories where the writer realised that an overly powerfull protagonist gets boring fast, and thus start creating obstacles that really dont make sence. that is even worse then just a powerfull character who takes a piss on everyone |
stylo1 chapter 3 . 12/3/2018 if he doesnt need a focus then why use a wand you dont like, just use a piece of wood that looks the same |
stylo1 chapter 2 . 12/3/2018 a thestral is closet to a demon than a dementor? yeah i dont believe that |
stylo1 chapter 2 . 12/3/2018 some demon, put him next to unicorn hair and phoenix feather and his nearly passes out then wtf will happen if you put him next to a real one. besides jubi making uzumaki decendent into a demon, it is not like naruto fought his whole life proving he isnt a demon, so how is this fitting? |
Jacob Phantom chapter 8 . 7/9/2018 Please update your story soon! |
LilasChupa chapter 8 . 6/4/2018 J'aime cette histoire elle est juste génial c'est dommage que tu ne l'ai pas fini lilaschupa gmail . com |
Monster King chapter 8 . 5/16/2018 Great story I really liked it a shame that you gave up on it. |
Lord Peverell-Potter-Black chapter 1 . 5/9/2018 mate i am quite saddened to hear that you discontinued this story this has to be in my top 5 favourite stories if you ever feel the need to continue it please feel free i would love to read more of this |
Lord Peverell-Potter-Black chapter 7 . 5/9/2018 it was actually Antioch Peverell Who First Owned the Elder Wand Ignotus was the original owner of the Invisibility Cloak |
reptoholic chapter 8 . 4/19/2018 Absolutely love your writing. |
reptoholic chapter 7 . 4/19/2018 Yessss |
reptoholic chapter 6 . 4/19/2018 Bahahahhahaa Fuckimg awesome. |