| Reviews for Don't Hold Your Breath |
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   russia2774 chapter 6 . 3/1/2019 more updates please love it |
| russia2774 chapter 6 . 10/24/2015 Love it please more updates |
| LivingALittle chapter 6 . 12/27/2014 This really good but upsetting cliff hanger! :( NEED MORE! |
| rosiegirl01 chapter 6 . 8/22/2014 love it so much please write more |
| Mblah chapter 2 . 4/20/2012 Im sorry but Your story is stupid and illogical. It's just too random and impossible and OOC. Your first chapter was good though, it just kinda went downhill. Though I do like the initial idea. |
| Katharina Liebe chapter 6 . 12/21/2011 The chapter was really good and I liked the different POVs. Are you going to update soon? I really like your story. |
| Katharina Liebe chapter 5 . 12/21/2011 You're really good at describing! Seriously, I could see every single thing you just wrote in my head it was that good. Keep up the awesome work! |
| Katharina Liebe chapter 4 . 12/21/2011 Well, this is going to be interesting...I can't wait to read the next chapter, which is what I'm going to do right now! Great work! |
| Katharina Liebe chapter 3 . 12/21/2011 This chapter was really good too. You're story is definitely entertaining! |
| Katharina Liebe chapter 2 . 12/21/2011 Hahaha the fire part made me laugh! That was great! I'm really liking this story, not going to lie :) |
| Katharina Liebe chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 You asked me a while ago to read your story and give you any tips I could. Well I've finally gotten around to it, I'm just sorry it took so long. The first chapter was really really good. I really like the premise of the story and how you write. I only found one or two grammatical errors, but that's it. Great job and keep up the awesome work! Now onto chapter 2! |
| elektra66 chapter 6 . 8/24/2011 I only have one word to describe your story... AWSOME! Keep writting and doing differents pov you' re very good at it :) xoxo 3 elektra66 |
| my 2 guys chapter 6 . 8/7/2011 that was good keep it up |
| Kesha101 chapter 6 . 8/2/2011 Is that it? U cant just write a good story and right as it gets good quit it! The reason no one is going to beta u is because of that! I'm sure as hell not going to! |
| SarahLouise122 chapter 6 . 7/7/2011 plz UD soon! |
