this was so good i loved it

I just finished reading your story.. Wahooo! it was intense and very well written :-) I really hope you will write more Burn Notice fanfictions.. Oui ? :-))

Pretty good for English not being your first language. Good plot. I couldn't wait to see what happens next and how they were going to get out of it.
One suggestion though, include more said tags. Sometimes I found it difficult to determine who was speaking.
Keep up the good work.

Great job! Loved the story. Thank you so much for writing it. I look forward to your next one. :)

So glad you decided to finish this story, and in such an exciting manner. Way to go Fi, rescuing Michael and getting to hit Char.

Loved it.

It feels so good when Fi acts as a saviour and gets people out of trouble. The best part was that she took out Char.

Hey, gotta say the ending was awesome .

I particulary loved all the explosions and whatnot :-)

À la prochaine ;)

Didine

omg cannooott wait to see what happens next!

Great job. Thanks for the update. More please when you get the chance. :)

Oh I'm worried for Michael. I think they're lying about having re captured Fiona. Vigel, maddy and Fi better get them out soon.

Hi,

you're welcome ;)

I loved the banter between Michael and Sam!

Great chapter, I loved it

Great job! More please. Thanks :)

I'm glad Virgil managed to rescue Fiona, but that leaves Mike and Sam facing the full wrath of Mr Jack and Char. Let's hope Fiona plan gets them both out safe.

I'm so so so so so so sorry! I completely forgot to send you back the chapter, I was gonna read it over, but I put it aside on my computer, thinking I was going to get back to it, but it completely slipped my mind.

and i like the twist of Virgil not having enough time

You have really great ideas.

Yay, bad a** Fiona is back! Would love to see her teach lesson to the bad guys. Continue soon.