I just read and finished this story. It’s amazing. Wish there was more but I’m still gonna keep it to read it again and again.

Make no sense. Hear me out.

This 'togetherness' is a plus. They (the pack and cullens and denali's) need to be allies, they need the numbers but damn, what the hell?

You have seth and Tanya 'forking', have family 'movie night with all of them in one room? Like the smell isn't killing one or the other group.

Have the alpha living in the house, but build a seperate house for the denali's?

Wolves inside, while you pack family in the 'dog house'?

They could smell the pack from a hundred yards away, and gag at the whiff, but now they 'LIVE TOGETHER and... nothing? Not a word of protest? Not even an open window? And you didn't even think about this? About sticking them in the SAME HOUSE and what that could do long term?

Did they even have to be in the SAME house? Couldn't they have lived near by? in town maybe?

Alice needs her visions at this crucial time, yet with a pack of wolves around she is able to have them? and do so without explanation as per why? Care to explain that?

You're not making ANY sense. Im sorry. You really aren't anymore. I see that No thought or the consequences of them, goes into your writing. It just whatever that comes to mind. 'Like oh this sounds cool.'

Where is the writer from Chapter 1 - to 7? Where did that person go?

SMGDH. Its a crying shame to watch someone stab their own creation like this.

TRILL

THank you for your contribution. But this is it for me. GL in your reviews, there are plenty of idiots who do 'think' about what they read. I'm sure they have something positive to say. So you'll be okay.

Remember when I told you I like this because you make logical arguements? Yeah... what happened to that? This is crazy now. I can't even follow any of the nonsensical decision these characthers are going on about.

Bella attempting to sacrifice her self for 'little wolf?' When she is pregnant with her own child. Where the hell is the self preservation or natural instinct to protect what growing in your own womb? The eff?

Then as humans Bella n Rachel (jb imprint) learn sign language in a fricking day, after they found a book in the library? the hell?

And they are still farming? why? they have battles to prepare for? and it won't make sense to have even started by the time the sprouts pop out of the ground. Nothing sufficent would have grown enough for them to even harvest... Which is why they needed to start in a cilmate that supports all yr round framing, like napa valley, CA. Somewhere ANYWHERE. jeez. SMH.

The eff?

Dude your falling off, big time.

ahh, this is reading like a satircial aftermath joke right right now.

Its lost its bite. I don't fear for the characther well being anymore. Not since that ridiculous meeting when carlisle tried to force jb on bella so she could have his litter in order to save the 'human race'.

Now its just like I feared. you mentioned issues once then forgot about them. (the smell for instance.) The wolves could have to 'live' with the cullens as allies. But don't need to live 'WITH' them. The eff? They could just come over without repercussion. They don't have to be in each other air to get along. SMH. seriously what where you thinking there?

ANd why they hell are they planning gardens in forks of all places? They need a place where snow isn't going to freeze the ground when winter comes. Where they could grow crops all year round. They need to relocate to an island or the southern hemishpere. Or the mid west. This should've been about thier journey together to through the south if you wanted to stick them together so badly.

You were so creative, what happened? Its like you stopped thinking.

There is more to the world than FORKS.

Still with the "I won't change you Bullshit" Ugh...

And who does Carlisle think he is to make that demand at all. That is very OOC.

Love the debate however.

Humans are monsters too... gr8 point bella.

Nice... I was fearing drama. The edward you painted seemed to be the type to 'sacrfice' himself to the fire for the 'assumed' greater good.

I thought he was going to push her toward JB out of some crap in his head about having babies. Or give JB first 'crack' at it. Have her have the baby then turn her for himself. Or some sick shit like that.

I am glad that you took the 'eff the world route' suuuuupppeeerrr proud of you! Love you sensical writing. I have yet to complain about you taking liberties or anyone doing dumb shit yet.

So... good job with that.

But the wolves are around, and they stink to high heaven. How are the cullens dealing with the smell? No one is even talking about it. Its like it is with every other fic. I gets an honorable mention in the beginning then completely forgotten about later. SMH. (Well I guess that is a complaint right there. lol)

Good chapter, but again... Early on Edward always ruins it. He never says what he really wants and that always pisses me off. I know some ppl live like that, but not me. I want something. Im upfront with it. #noregrets.

Love the beginning very exciting stuff. HAAAATTTEEE Edwards POV. Especially in the beginning. They are always so filled with his BULLSHIT reasoning of 'soulless' this or demon that, and 'I won't change her because i belives this or that' (Like he is the only fucking one who could make the choice. asshole.) He is just an over the top self loathing asshole. and I HATE the way he thinks. and I hate that no body calls him out on his BULLSHIT. They just all coddle him. Or worse tell him he is smart.

7 of the dumbest vamps i've ever read about.

But like your story. Going to see where this all goes.

love this fanfiction it is one of my faves.

Loved this story hard, all over again. I should have signed up with a false name, just so I could leave more reviews. Entertaining. Liberating. Fun! Great plot too. Thank you. :) kaz1853

This is such a good story! Hopefully I have t reviewed this chapter already :)

Hit and miss with the reviews, never sure when I'll be locked out.. But this is really good. Great characterisation. Lots of lovely inbuilt tug o wars. :)

I love how sassy she is :)

I've read this before, having trouble reviewing, but it is just as good and exciting second time around :)

Oh, that was a great chapter! I like how Edward is borderline irritable. Frustrated (love) will do that! And bella's reactions seem spot on :)